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2016年考研英语一大作文解析(考神陈曲版)

(2015-12-26 18:58:28)
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2016年考研英语一大作文解析
考神团队 陈曲

    本次的英语一考试大作文出得非常好,要求我们写一篇关于榜样的文章。这和我们课堂上一直在强调的精神品质道德类完美吻合,但是题目增加了两性关系的元素,所以这种混合式的出题方法非常值得大家关注。
    文章如果机械地使用一些所谓的模板,可能会低分,因为非常难寻找到一个完美的模板可以合理地嵌套。考研作文再也很难用一两天时间突击到高分了。可以利用我们上课讲授的思路,进行写作。

写作思路:

第一段:描述图片—解释标题

第二段:阐述主题—寻找原因

第三段:我的观点—发扬观点

详见我的《考研作文密码v3.1》

2016年考研英语一大作文解析(考神陈曲版) 

This set of pictures capture two vivid butquite different scenes. In the first drawing, a father, who is watching TV inthe armchair by himself, is requesting his son to study hard. However, his sonseems very absent-minded. By stark contrast, the father in the second drawingis instead working in front of the writing desk with his son and therefore hisson dedicates himself to studying, following his father’s example. Theintention of the artist can be well reflected in the subtitle: “rather thanbeing a demander, one should be a role-model.” 

Admittedly, the phenomenon depicted is quiteprevailing in our society as a growing number of parents are attaching muchimportance to offering their kids the best education. Unfortunately, theseparents have ignored the most important element in their teaching method –themselves. The primary factor is that children spend most of the time withtheir parents and witness their behaviors every day. As a result, children willimitate or copy their parents. If a father likes smoking, his son might becomeaddicted to smoking. If a father likes reading, his son might fall in love withbooks. Parents are the best examples of their children. As the saying goes, “Likefather, like son”. Moreover, Children will rely heavily on their parents intheir daily life. Parents should gain their trust by behaving themselves and leadtheir children to the right track. 

Children are the future of our nation. To advocate the importance of parents’ role in education, the mass media should be held accountable. To the best of my knowledge, they should make relevant public campaign to advocate the idea that parents should play a vital role in nurturing their children. Watch your character, it may become your children’s destiny!

祝各位考生明天顺利发挥,今天不管考的如何,都不重要。

塞翁失马焉知非福;塞翁得马焉知非祸?




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