加载中…《剑桥雅思7》写作真题原创高分范文（Test 1 Writing
(2009-06-29 14:40:01)
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审题要点
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话题类别
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本文可以归为教育类话题，但不是传统意义上的“学校教育与学习”话题，而是更深层次的关于“先天才能与后天教育”的讨论。
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考题指令
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It is generally believed that some people are
born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and
others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can
be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both
these views and give your own opinion.
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考题解释
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人们普遍认为一些人生来就具有某些才能，比如说体育方面和音乐方面的才能，而其他人就没有这种天生的才能。然而，有时人们也指出任何一个孩子都可以通过教育成为优秀的运动员或音乐家。讨论两种观点并给出自己的意见。
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关键词
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talent 天资，才能
sports person运动员
musician 音乐家
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思路扩展
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本题的难点在于要充分讨论“先天”与“后天”两方面因素对于孩子在运动和音乐方面取得成就的重要性。关于“先天”与“后天”的讨论在很多话题中都会出现，例如智商，或者性格形成等，难点就在于不能通过理论化的论证，而是要通过适当举例，来让读者（考官）理解先天和后天都很重要。
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SAMPLE
ANSWER （高分考生习作）
Who created the
marvels of Yao Ming and Jay Chou - parents or teachers? This
question has ignited a public debate about whether certain talents
like sports or music are natural or
nurtured.
Some people show
an early predisposition to various sports or artistic abilities,
and this is often because a certain genetic trait runs in their
family. Reports show that 9 out of 10 famous sportsmen and artists
had a parent who had also been successful. NBA superstar Yao Ming,
for example, was born in a basketball family - both his parents are
above 6 feet high and were once basketball players themselves. This
situation is also true in the music domain. A person has fabulous
singing voices and another makes you cringe during their karaoke
renditions. This can normally be explained by the genetic
difference between the two people’s vocal
cord.
However, each
child is likely to do well, or at least better, in sports or music
providing he or she is given a certain period of specialized
training. Many young people that I know who started learning the
piano from childhood have achieved level 10, the highest level in
the amateur piano proficiency test, after years of systematic
training. It is also true that almost any undergraduate student in
China can play Taiji boxing perfectly after some guidance and
practice. Therefore, with sufficient interest and appropriate
practice, every one can acquire certain abilities in music and
sports after some training.
So far I have
been unable to identify the dominant factor which determines a
person’s success in sports or music. I tend to think that both
genetic inheritance and guided practice are needed for any person
to eventually achieve superiority in not only the two fields
discussed in this essay, but also in any other filed of learning a
person may encounter in his/her life.
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文章布局分析
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第一段：
引言段 |
引出问题式的开头，并辅以个性化的举例。为后文的双边讨论做出铺垫。
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第二段：
主体段1 |
讨论“先天因素”在体育和音乐领域的重要性。用运动员和音乐家的“家庭基因”为理由，证明一些才能确实是天生的。
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第三段：
主体段2 |
讨论“后天培训”在体育和音乐领域的重要性。体育领域给出的是中国大学生学习“太极拳”的例子，也可以算作是体育技能。音乐方面给出的是儿童钢琴考级的有力证据，说明经过系统训练，可以培养出钢琴演奏家。
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第四段：
结尾段 |
采取折中的态度，说明两者都很重要。任何领域，不限于体育和音乐，如果要想成为超越他人的佼佼者，一定的天资和后天的训练都是必须的。
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