加载中…Cohesive Device 探析一
(2009-08-07 17:00:19)
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朗阁海外考试研究中心/上海朗阁
Coherence and Cohesion ——
7分第二条原文：
Uses a range of cohesive devices appropriately although there may be some under-/over-use
6分第二条原文为：
Uses cohesive devices effectively, but cohesion within and/or between sentences may be faulty or mechanical;
6分第三条提到：
May not always use referencing clearly or appropriately
与之对应的5分第二条为：
Makes inadequate, inaccurate or over-use of cohesive devices
5分第三条为：
May be repetitive because of lack of referencing and substitution
1 Lexical
aspect:（词汇方面）
1.1 Linking word（连词）：
1.1.1 并列或递进关系：and; also; too; or; Besides; furthermore; moreover; likewise; meanwhile等
1.1.2 让步或转折关系：but; however; whereas; nonetheless; nevertheless; although; though; otherwise; yet; rather; despite; rather等
1.1.3 因果关系：because; so; since; for; so; thus; therefore; thereby;
举例：Like
1.2 Linking phrase(短语)：
1.2.1 并列或递进关系：not only…but also; as well as; either…or; in addition; apart from that; beyond that
1.2.2 让步或转折关系: even though; in spite of; on the other hand; on the contrary; in contrast; instead of， It is true that…;
1.2.3 因果关系: now that; in that; due to; owing to; as a result (of); in that case
举例：for example; for instance; in particular; such as; just as
1.3 Adverb (副词)：
1.3.1 并列或递进关系：additionally; similarly; alternatively;
1.3.2 让步或转折关系: surprisingly; admittedly
1.3.3 因果关系: consequently; eventually;
举例：especially;
1.4 Reference(代词)：
They; them; he; him; she; her; it; these; those; this ;that等
2 Syntax: （句法方面）
2.1 Punctuation (标点符号)：
2.1.1 并列或递进关系：分号
2.1.2 同位、举例：冒号；破折号；括号
2.2 Clause (各种从句)：主句的信息为重点信息；从句信息为次要信息
3 Unnoticeable cohesive
device(高级连接手段)
3.1 Rhetorical purpose: （修辞)
3.1.1 排比：并列关系
3.2 Substitution/paraphrasing(同义转换)：用词性转换、近义词、下义词等有关联的信息来重复重点信息。这是获得7分以上高分的重要标志。
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