（2014江西卷）

  假定你是星光中学的高中毕业生李华，母校将为高一新生举办主题为“What to learn in senior high school?”的英语沙龙活动，特邀请你结合自身经历谈谈自己的体会。请根据以下提示准备一份英语发言稿。

        1.学会学习：方法，习惯等；

        2.学会做人：真诚，友善；

        3.学会其他：考生自拟。

注意：1.词数120左右；

      2.发言稿开头和结尾已给出，不须抄在答题卡上，不计入总次数。

【考点】考察提纲类作文

【写作指导】

本文属于提纲类短文，母校邀请毕业生李华做一个关于“What to learn in senior high school?”的英语沙龙。谈谈自己的体会，主要叙述过去的事情，使用一般过去时和第一人称。要点：1.学会学习：方法，习惯等； 2.学会做人：真诚，友善；3.学会其他：积极参加课外活动和体育活动等。

提纲类作文，需要我们用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。

【一句多译】

养成好习惯很重要

（1）Developing a good habit is also of importance.

（2）Is very important for us to develop a good habit.

【参考范文】

Good morning, everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.

    In the coming three years, our school life will be challenging. First ,we should learn to learn efficiently. Personally, I used to try effective method to achieve my academic goals. Developing a good habit is also of importance. It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons, get actively involved in class, and review what had been taught after class.

  In addition, we should learn how to get along well with others. In school, I respected teachers and was friendly with classmates. It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere.

  Finally, we should take part in sports and outdoors activities frequently. They were really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life.

  No pains no gains. I am sure that with great efforts, you will enjoy a colorful and fruitful life here.

  Thank you!

深吸一口气将有助于减轻你的不安情绪。（decrease）

Taking a deep breath will help decrease your upset.

只有通过努力学习，我们才能取得巨大的进步。(work)

It is only by working hard that we can make great progress.

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