加载中…英语写作中常犯的错误
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英语写作中常犯的错误
词性不分
词性不分是英语造句中的忌讳。英语注重形态，词性和用法是相对应的，例如名词是绝对不可以充当谓语的，而充当谓语的绝对不允许由形容词单独承担。所以如果词性错了就意味着其用法也可能出错，这样的句子一定对文章的准确表达有所影响。造句过程中我们要特别注意以下几点：
第一，动词要分清及物与否，不及物动词不直接跟宾语，不用于被动语态。
第二，分清楚形容词和动词，形容词不能做谓语，动词的谓语形式不能做表语。
第三，动词的谓语形式 (有时、体、态、气的形态表示) 和动词的非谓语形式 (动名词、不定式、分词) 要区别开来。
第四，要分清现在分词和过去分词的使用场合。
第五，意义相同但词性不同的词要特别注意。
第六，拼写相同但意义不同、词性不同的词也要特别注意。
巩固练习：改正句子。
1. China has occurred the great changes in recent years.
2. He very excellent in many aspects.
3. I can sure that you will see a better film.
4. In this chaotic society, we are more likely to become depress.
5. Human being is a kind of animal fulling of different feelings.
6. Nowadays it is surprised that many students care their appearance and clothes but rare pay great attention to their study.
7. Since you have been keeping a good mood, your teachers would be more like you.
人称不一致
人称一致不仅指在一句话中主语应该保持一致，而且在一篇文章中，前后的称谓也应当保持一致，不能出现混乱的情况。
巩固练习：改正句子。
1. They have the right of discussing with her husband.
2. One serious problem that influence a child's healthy development is that they do not have enough psychological space.
3. Admittedly, there are merit to both arguments. But I do believe that game do good to children.
主谓不一致
在四、六级写作中，考生经常出现主谓不一致问题。所谓主谓一致指的是英语句子的主语和谓语在人称和数上应保持一致。它可分为三种情况:
巩固练习：改正句子。
1.Some women are not secretary in the office, instead, they become manager of the company.
2. Misconceptions about apes has turned a relatively peaceful animal into a terrifying monster.
3. The rising cost of necessities like food and shelter force many elderly people to live in poverty.
指代不清
在使用代词如 it, he, she, this, that, which, one 等的时候，前面的句子中应该出现明确的先行词。如果指代不清，就会造成意思上的混乱。
巩固练习：改正句子。
1. The world's energy demand still continues to rise. How will that ever be possible for us to get through?
2. Susan's mother wondered if she was tall enough to be a model.
断句错误
英语的句子要求主从句直接要由恰当的衔接词连接，并列句也要求用衔接词或分号连接。由于汉语中没有这些要求，句子之间可以用逗号连接，因此，在四、六级作文中，很多同学的英语句子用逗号连接两个各自完整的句子；或将两个句子连接，但是没有使用标点符号或衔接词，以致于造成病句。
1. They read different books just to meet their different needs. Because different people have different needs to read the different kinds of books.
2. Students and teacher heard Li Ming went to hospital, all of them went to visit him.
成分残缺
英语的句子虽然结构多样，但都是由基本的句子结构演化扩展而来。如果句子不符合基本的句子结构要求，缺少必要成分或者将从句或短语误当作句子，就不能表达一个完整的意思。由于英语和汉语的表达方法和习惯不同，成分残缺是中国学生在英文写作中容易出现的问题。
1.And then there is no need to worry whether you'll be lost in a strange place, if you have a cellphone. Especially, in some urgent situations.
2. There are other functions about cellphone. For example, time-schedule.
3. Always, I dream about the childhood which including happiness and sadness.
4. I drove slowly past the old brick house. The place where I grew up
现象解释型模板一
1.Recently,__________.
2.What amaze us most is_________.
3.It is true that_________.
4.There are many reasons explaining_________.
5.The main reason is________.
6.What is more__________.
7.Thirdly,__________.
8.As a result_________.
9.Considering all these,_________.
10.For one thing,________.
11.For another,_________.
12.In conclusion,__________.
对比选择型模板一
1.Recently,we may hear quite different opinions__________.
2.Most people take it for granted that________.
3.However,others hold________.
4.A dominant idea is that_______.
5.In this view,_______.
6.Nevertheless,the objectors think________.
7.They argue that________.
8.As to me,I prefer________.
9.On the one hand,________.
10.On the other hand,________.
11.Therefore,_________.
12.In conclusion,_________.
问题解决型模板一
1.Nowadays,there is a growing concern on_______.
2.It is certain that________.
3.However,_________.
4.It well cause many serious results if_______.
5.Firstly,________.
6.Secondly,________.
7.Finaly,________.
8.In spite of all these,there are still many ways________.
9.First of all,________.
10.In addition,________.
11.Thirdly,_________.
12.Only in this way,_________.
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