Choosing a Career

    For most people, choosing a career is not easy, yet it is the most important decision you will make in your life. Find the right career, and you will be happy and successful. It pays therefore, to collect as much information as you can.

    There is much information about it.

    First, it is necessary that you should think about salary, working conditions,working hours and the challenge. In my opinion, the challenge is so important, because the salary and position depend on it. What's more, relationship is important, too. If your workmates are friendly, you will be happier and more successful.

    Overall, if you don't know what job is best suited to you, you can try different kinds of work before making up your mind. But you should remember: evaluate yourself and be sure you know your own interests and talents.

                                        (刘当当)

评：这是假期作业，能如此认真出色的完成，说明他还是用心的。（很多学生假期作业是马虎应对的。）这次书面表达并没有规定内容，只有一个范畴：about jobs，所以学生可以自由发挥。这篇书面表达结构合理，逻辑清晰，中心突出。并能很好的借鉴优美的表达方式。虽然中间一段表达上显得粗糙，但仍不影响文章的整体感。