A marvelous increasing number of individuals are becoming aware of exceedingly lonely in contemporary society. It is adverse to the personal health of individuals due to seldom communicating with others and frequently having sense of sadness.

     Perhaps there are several factors accounting for this phenomenon. For a start, coincident with the advancement of science and technology, a variety of digital products are widely used in our daily life. It shrinks the opportunity that we can keep in touch with others face to face. Besides, Owing to be occupied by busy work in tense life, we fail to devote adequate time to making friends by participating in an army of activities. In addition, if someone does not understand what remind in our minds we will feel lonely and be upset.

      Measures, therefore, must be taken to eliminate loneliness in our life before giving rise to more severe consequences. We should use digital products appropriately and urge ourselves to making the acquaintance of somebody else. Moreover, it is beneficial for us to eliminate loneliness by listening to music, reading books, taking exercise and so forth. We will alleviate loneliness in our life if we do like that.

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