开放型作文——感激gratitude
(2012-11-29 13:17:08)
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When we grow up, we often get a lot of love, support and help from our teachers, friends as well as our parents. However, we seldom express our gratitude to them. Being grateful to others is what we shouldn’t forget.
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As middle school students, not only should we acquire rich knowledge, but also we should have good qualities. I think expressing our gratitude to people who have helped us is among the good qualities we must possess.
佳句背诵
I am very grateful to you for your advice. 多谢你的指导.
I'm deeply grateful to you. 我衷心感谢你.
I am truly grateful for all your help. 我实在感谢你的帮助.
Learning to be grateful makes us develop soundly both physically and mentally.
Being grateful will be a big catalyst (催化剂)for friendly relationship among people. It can shorten the distance with classmates or even strangers. What counts most is that it may make the world full of warmth and let people know what he have done is worthwhile.
Learning to be grateful is of great
importance and quite necessary in our life. Thus,people feel
obliged to show their gratitude to those, they think,
who have offered them help or done something for them. In
their opinion, showing gratitude is a proper kind of attitude which
brings them comfort, along with sunlight deep into
heart, which in turn makes those who offer help feel
pleased.
As children, we cannot thank our parents and teachers enough. We owe them gratitude for what they have done. They play a fundamental role in building up our strength both mentally and physically. What’s more, they exert positive effects on guiding us in the right direction and leading us to the road of success.
Their guidance in combination with
their advice is what it takes to lead us to the road of
success.
Some of us always take it for granted that our parents ,teachers and others should take care of us, ignoring their feelings.
Our parents spend much time looking after us all days. Not only do them give birth to us, but also they give us the chance to be excellent people. We can never repay them enough.
“A thankful heart is not only the greatest virtue, but the parent of all other virtues.”
感恩不单是美德,更是美德之母
far too many young college students lack the sense of gratitude,
These young adults were not and are not aware of the huge importance of expressing gratitude to those who once helped them, from teachers to parents and so on.
we should develop an attitude of gratitude, and give thanks
for everything that happens to us, because every step forward is a
step toward achieving something bigger and better than our current
situation.
审题:写三段,第一段写表达感激的必要和重要性;
第二段写一个接受帮助的人表达了感激的事例;
第三段写应该牢记感激帮助过我们的人。
Good example:
Learning to be grateful is of great importance and quite necessary in our life. In daily life, it is impossible for us to deal with all the problems we come across on our own. When puzzled, we can receive the help offered by people around us. Without those help, we couldn’t have lived such a happy life.
Many people are worthy of being appreciated. But we owe our parents gratitude in particular. Also, being grateful to our friends proves to be significant. Our teachers play a very necessary role in our life. We must have a grateful heart, which requires us to help them in return.
Not only should we express our love to all the people who help us a lot, we also need to thank our competitors. That doesn’t necessarily mean fancy words but rather more actions taken to reduce their burden. For instance, we can help our parents do some housework and assist our classmates in solving their problems. In a word, we should spare no effort to help them.
Last week in a bus I saw a young man warmly gave his seat to a woman, who looked tired with a baby in her arms. To my surprise, the woman took the young man’s seat without saying a single word of thanks. Instead she stared at the young man with a cold, suspecting expression, which embarrassed the young man and I felt sorry for him.
One young academically excellent man went to apply for a managerial position in a big company. After seeing the young man’s smooth and perfect hands, the director requested him to clean his mother’s hands when he went back home.
Everyone has the right and the duty to show our gratitude to the world. Only by doing so can we achieve our dream of building up a harmonious society. Only by thanking and caring each other can we we enjoy the same sunshine and appreciate the same love under the same sky.(190单词)
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李紫君作文修改:
We should be grateful to those who give us love, support and help, which should be remembered by us forever and it is also necessary for us to express gratitude in words or with deeds.
One afternoon on my way home I saw a poor boy begging for money from passers-by on the roadside, maybe he needed money to buy some food or see a doctor. yet nobody paid attention to him. Without hesitation I went up to him and gave him some money.
On arriving home I found my wallet lost. I hurried back to look for it . Finally I found it from that very poor boy, who said he accidentally found it and waited there till I went back to claim it.
Gratitude can make life much more beautiful. Living with gratitude we will have a lot of fun and love in turn.