（原诗属五步抑扬格，韵式为ABAB CDCD EFEF GG；拙译

      每行12字，以4a+4b+4c+2d韵谐之。—欢迎切磋针砭！）

Time’s sea hath been five years at its slow ebb;

时光之海缓缓落潮已有五年；                                   a

    Long hours have to and fro let creep the sand,

    久久以来反反复复爬行沙滩，                              A

Since I was tangled in thy beauty’s web,

因我曾迷惘于你交织的美艳，                                   a

     And snared by the ungloving of thy hand:

     你裸裎的纤纤玉手令我缠绵。                              a

And yet I never look on midnight sky,

然而我从不眺望午夜的穹苍，                                   b

    But I behold thine eye’s well-memoried light;

    但却关注你过目难忘的眼光；                               b

I cannot look upon the rose’s dye,

我无法观赏玫瑰的艳抹浓妆，                                   b

    But to thy cheek my soul doth take its flight:

    可我的灵魂老飞向你的脸庞。                               b

I cannot look on any budding flower,

我无法紧盯花蕾的含苞萌发，                                    c

    But my fond ear, in fancy at thy lips,

    可我耳朵痴迷于贴近你嘴巴，                                c

And hearkening for a love-sound, doth devour

侧耳倾听爱的声音—爱的表达，                                c

    Its sweets in the wrong sense.—Thou dost eclipse

    在错觉中尽兴饱餐喁喁情话。                                 c

Every delight with sweet remembering,

你以甜蜜回忆令欢愉尽失色，                                     d

And grief unto my darling joys dost bring.

并将伤痛带给我舒心的欢乐。                                     d

                                           February, 1818

                              —by John KEATS 

【附】：张崇殷亦步亦趋韵译本—

         《给—狐亭遗梦》

时间之海已【沉移】五年光景，        11A

 低潮处，【沙漏】反复将光阴【滤过】。  12B

你的美交织，教【人】神牵魂萦，       11A

 自一见你素臂，便俘获了我。        11B

可我，【每当】凝视夜半的天【籁】，    11C

 【仍】看到你的眼睛闪耀光芒；       11D

【每当】我看到玫瑰的色彩           10C

 灵魂便朝你的脸颊飞翔；           10D

而【每当】我看到初【蓓】的花蕾       11E

 这耳朵，仿【也】贴近你【温柔的】唇际  13F

【热望】听一句情话，【即就】吞【味】   11E

 那【错误的芬芳，是】甜蜜的回忆      11F

【让】每种喜悦都黯去了光华，        11G

你给我的欢乐把忧伤【遗洒】。        11G

                    1818年2月