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教学是一种享受--chainoflove续写

(2022-04-24 16:08:20)

出自必修三u2  的乡村音乐,改为读后续写

Chain of love

He was driving home one evening

In his beat up Pontiac庞蒂克汽车

When an old lady flagged him down

Her Mercedes had a flat

He could see that she was frightened

Standing out there in the snow

'Till he said "I'm here to help you ma'am

By the way, my name's Joe."

She said "I'm from St. Louis

And I'm only passing through

I must've seen a hundred cars go by

This is awful nice of you."

When he changed the tire, and closed her trunk

And was about to drive away

She said "How much do I owe you?"

Here's what he had to say

"You don't owe me a thing

I've been there too

And someone once helped me out

Just the way I'm helping you

If you really wanna pay me back

Here's what you do

Don't let the chain of love end with you."

Well a few miles down the road

The lady saw a small cafe

She went in to grab a bite to eat

And then be on her way

But she couldn't help but notice

How the waitress smiled so sweet

And how she must've been eight months along

And dead on her feet

No, she didn't know her story

And she probably never will

When the waitress went to get her change

From a hundred dollar bill

The lady slipped right out the door

And on a napkin left a note

There were tears in the waitress's eyes

When she read what she wrote

You don't owe me a thing

I've been there too

And someone once helped me out

Just the way I'm helping you

If you really wanna pay me back

Here's what you do

Don't let the chain of love end with you

That night when she got home from work

The waitress climbed into bed

She was thinking 'bout the money

And what the lady's note had said

As her husband lay there sleeping

She whispered soft and low

Everything's gonna be alright; "I love you, Joe."

1. 简单画出chain of love 图示

2. 找出细节描写:动作,表情,心理等

3. 找出高级句式。

Lucy described the lady to Joe, and Joe was really surprised._______.

 

 

They decided to do something special.__________.


第一段的续写--平淡 

The lady sounded like the one Joe helped before. Joe asked what the lady had left. Then Lucy brought the note and readDon't let the chain of love end with you. Joe was touched and wanted to cry. Joe then told Lucy how he had helped this lady.

 第一段的续写--改进

 The lady sounded like the one Joe helped before. To make it sure, Joe asked what the lady had left. Then Lucy brought the note, reading softlyDon't let the chain of love end with you. Hearing this, Joe felt a lump in his throat, tears in his eyes. How can it be! Joe then whispered Lucy how he had helped this lady with pride. Lucys eyes twinkled with disbelief and pride.

 

 

They decided to do something special.__________.

 

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