雅思大作文开头避免照抄题目的三个小办法
(2018-03-01 23:31:29)
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很多同学看到雅思题目,直接照搬照抄放在自己作文的开头。这样是不OK的!!!(三个惊叹号表示强烈警示)可是又要表达相似的意思,还不能用原词原句,怎么办?其实很简单,同学们只要将题目的内容稍微改写一下,用自己的话转述或者叫复述出来就可以,此处一定要注意语言精练,切忌洋洋洒洒,字数控制在15-25字之内,大概两行。举例来详细说明一下:
举例1):Do you think it is better to send criminals to jail or let them receive education or job training?(你觉得罪犯是在监狱里服刑好,还是接受教育或者工作培训好?)
先来交代一下背景,铺垫一下,“对罪犯的处理在最近几年已经被广泛地争论”,那么怎么处理罪犯呢?用什么样的方式会更好一些?The treatment of criminals has been open to debate in recent years.Some people think it is better to send criminals to jails than to let them receive education or job training.
建议同学们采用下面的三种方式对于题目进行改写:
A, 巧用经典句型: There is much controversy over whether to send criminals to jail or to let them receive education or job training.
B,换换句子成分的顺序: Some people think that to send criminals to jail is better than to let them receive education or job training.
C,改变句子成分: Some people think that imprisonment is better than education or job training in treating criminals.
举例2):Nowadays, people are facing more and more work-related stress. State the possible reasons for this phenomenon and make some recommendations about how to combat it。
这道题目的话题关于压力这个社会现象,我们立刻会想到,目前社会上很多人都在承受着或多或少的压力,很多人可以具体一点,白领,蓝领等。可用it is generally believed that … 形式主语的句型,It is generally believed that white-collar as well as blue-collars workers are suffering from psychological and physical stress stemming from work.
举例3):Environmental problem is too big for individual countries and individual people to address. In other words, we have reached the stage where the only way to protect the environment is at an international level. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
本题话题为环境问题,环境对于个人和国家都有很大的影响,In modern society/ At present等表时间的介词短语来引导一个叙述句型,In modern society, environment related issues have confronted ecological scientists, government agencies and the general public.
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