在高考前，以09年高考作文为例，给同学作过一次2010年高考作文写作的改篇练习！

第一时间从学员温露露得知今年考题后(magic power of polite words)，感觉写作思路与去年有很大的相似！为了说明改编技术的妙处，习作如下： 

      More and more people attach great importance to relationship in career success. Being polite is the first and most important step to develop good relationship among friends. Polite words can be easy yet very powerful in your daily life.

     Always saying please and thank you will make your friends feel more comfortable and more willing to offer help when necessary! we all know that one man's success is based on how he deal with people! Always be grateful to other people's kindness and  show your gratitude through the words you speak. The more surppport you win from other people, the faster you will move toward your goal.

     Nowdays few people seem to realize the importance of being polite. we students should form good habits and behavior in good manners. First learn to be dutiful to our parents and be friendly to your siblings when at home. Then at school, listen respectfully when your teachers instruct you, obey and accept their advice to improve yourself. You will make further progress if you express your gratitude in time. Remember, being polite costs nothing but it's worth of million dollars.

09年高考作文：Turning a bad mood to good mood! 100字左右的记叙文或议论文。
记叙文：发生的具体事件，对你的心情有何影响，你如何应对

议论文：好心情的重要性，产生坏情的原因，应该如何调整心情。

这是我们专门为高三学生准备的一篇范文，几乎每一个句式，都是来自我曾经操练过的文章，只要稍作变动，都可以在另一篇文章中写出来，包括2010年高考作文，建议你一定要熟读并背下来.

     More and more people attach great importance to happiness, If you are in a good mood, you not only can do things more efffectively, but get along well with people around you as well. The happier you are, the more successful you will be. That is why our government is calling for a “harmony society”. If you are always in a bad mood, people won’t be willing to coorperate with you and your study or business will be getting down.

      Instead of being in good mood, most people seem to live a unhappy life. No matter what happened in their life, their just notice the negative side! As a matter of fact, every coin has two sides, and every dog has its day. You have got to see things positively, no matter how terrible things turn out to be, you can still find something to celebrate.

     It’s how you deal with others that determins how you achieve happiness. True happiness comes from helping others. Ask not what others can do for you, ask what you can do for others. At the same time, be thankful for everything happens in your life, you will soon get into a good mood. Lets always hope for the best, and prepare for the worst. You know, life is short, why not just cover it with smile and sunshine.