雅思作文修改——learning a language
(2010-07-10 22:34:22)
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In order to learn a language well, we should also learn about the country as well as the cultures and lifestyles of the people who speak it.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Along with the intercourse and development of global society and economy, language (,)which is (a) principal factor for communication(,) is received (receives) more attention(s) by common people. In order to learn a language well, some people propose that we should also learn about the country as well as the cultures and lifestyles of the people who speak it. As for this notion, I tend to agree.
Learning about the country’s cultures and lifestyles helps us master a language more quickly and accurately. To begin with, seeing that the majority of language(s) contains its(their) own culture background(s), we could memorize new words more quickly and accurately though understanding the underlying meanings of (the)language. What’s more, different living habits and special customs in different countries.(这不是一个完整的句子,只有主语,改为different living habits and special customs exist in different countries) When we know about them, we could express ourselves clearly. By contrast, if you don’t know about(know little about这个上课讲过) some cultures and lifestyles, you might make a mistake(mistakes) unconsciously in communication, which may possibly result in (being)misunderstood by others.
Apart from the above, learning about the country as well as the cultures and lifestyles is favorable for achieving the communication, by which I mean if you understand that country’s cultures and lifestyles, you will communicate with local resident(s) well and profoundly, which may possibly result in(换成lead to 吧,用了两次了都) achieving the better intercourse.
However, to some extent only learning a language without learning about state as well as(getting acquainted to) cultures and lifestyles is also able to master a language, but in practice the purpose of learning a language is to understand the nation and cultures by intercourse, thereby only learning a language is not enough.
Overall, as far as I am concerned, I believe that the best methods to acquiring a language well is to learning about country as well as cultures and lifestyles of the people who speak it at the same time. After all, promoting the communication and understanding among nations is our ultimate goal.
Band 5.5, 语法错误有点多,改掉些语法错误就是6