高一英语短文改错20篇
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1
Have you ever heard from the saying: All work and
no
play make Jack a dull boy? What this means is that if you
study all the times you will become a boring
person. You
must go out and having fun with your friends,
otherwise
you will lose him. No one wants to be friends with
the
person who that only works and studies. Perhaps
you have
a confidence problem. Please try remember that the
work
you do is for yourself rather than for anyone
else. You do
not have to compete your classmates. No one can
be
happier in studying seven days and seven nights a
week.
2
Dear Tracy,
Although I'm 1 6 years old,but my father still treats
me as a careless children. He doesn’t value my
opinions.
He is very strict with me and often punishes me
about
leaving things lying around in the house while he
did this
all time. I think he fails to set an example to me
to
follow. But he often says:“Doing as I say,not as I do.”
Even worse,he points out my past mistakes to
guests,
making me feel hurting. I love my father, but I
can’t
bear what he does. I have been tried many
times
to talk with he but he never listens. Please, help
me.
Puzzled
3
Every morning Steve went to work by train. As
he
has a long trip, he always buys newspaper. It
helps
make the time passing more quickly. One
Tuesday
morning, he turned over the sports page. He
wanted
to see the report about an important football
match
the night before. The report was so interesting that he
forgot to get off at his station. He did not know
it unless
he saw the sea. He got off at the next station,
and had to wait
a long time for a train to go back. It was no
doubt that he arrived
late at the office. His boss was angry when Sieve
told to him
why he was late. “Work is very important than
football! ”.
he shouted.
4
When my father bought me a computer as a birthday
gift for
me in last year, I felt very excited. As we all
know, computers
are getting more and more usefully now. Much
information can
be stored in them. We can also learn that has
lately happened
in the world on the internet. In the past, people
had to do lots of
work which was very dangerous. Now, but, computers
can do it
instead. When an exam is coming, I often did some
exercises
on my computer. Then it will correct it and tell
me the right
answers. In this way it is very convenient for me
to prepare
the exam than before. The computer has become my
real friend.
5
In 10th April this year, as Li Ming was leaving
his home in
the morning, he got into the lift together a
woman. When the lift
got to the four floor, it stopped and a
middle-aged
man enter. Once the man got in, he snatched the
woman’s
handbag. He pulled both Li Ming and the woman out
of the
Lift. Li Ming ran downstairs. When he reached for
the ground
floor, he saw the man walked out. He told the
caretaker
at once and they both followed the thief to a
restaurant
nearby which they met two policemen. Li Ming told
them all
About the case and the thief has finally
caught.
6
One day last week I went a walk in the
country.
In the morning the weather was well and the sun
was
shining; the sky was blue and there were no
could.
Soon a cool wind started blown and black clouds
were covered the sun and then it started to
rain.
There were no houses in sight, but I got very
wet.
After a hour or so, I managed to catch a bus
which
took me home. But when I arrived I was
shivering
and I knew I had caught a bad cold. I
must
have taken my coat. I had nothing to do but
to
stay at home and wait for a doctor.
7
I visited my aunt in the countryside near the city last week.
I was surprised to see that great changes had been
taken place
in the countryside. Take my aunt’s family for
example. We
supply precious trees and flowers to the stores in
the city and
have over ten workers working for themselves.
Their family’s
income reached as much 100,000 yuan last year. Nor
only
did they have a house, a car and computers, they
can also afford
a trip abroad every year. When asking what else
they needed
most, they said that they wanted to learn a few
English so that
they could do business with foreigners directly.
To their delighted, 84.
my cousin can use that he has learned from
university to help
them with overseas trade.
8
Women are playing a much important part in society
than before
Now women are working as teachers , scientists and
even leaders
Almost all jobs that used to be done by men is
done perfectly
well by women . Women are no longer looked down in
society
As the changes in their social role ,
women’s position in the family
has been improved as well .
That’s hard to find the wife is busy while
the husband is sitting in an armchair, watches TV.
In spite of all
these changes , the great number of men still
guard their rights .
Sometimes few women are allowing to attend
important meetings
This is the problem we should try to solve it now
9
Hi
Thank you for your e-mail ! You asked me about my
friends and how
we like to do . Well , I guess I do what most
people to do . I like reading
books , watching films and listen to music . My
favourite sport is volley-
ball. Most of my friends play volleyball together
with me . My best
friend is two years elder than me .She goes to a
different school , but
we always get together after school to talk and
have funs . We some-
times do homework together .What about yourself ?
Tell me something
about yourself , your friends and what you like to
do . I had also like to
know something about
China . We have read China in school and I am
very interesting in learning more about it .
Please e-mail me soon !
Lisa
10
Here is a photo which I’ve kept for many years .
Look , the
child in it is me . Do you think it that it that I
was very lovely ? Yes .
You see , I was making a face . There was a hat on
my head
while there were no shoes on my foot . I asked my
mother how
old I was them . Mother said that I was three
years old in that
Time . Can you see the house all making of wood ?
The house
which was new then , but it is very old now . I
was born in this
old house and lived here for eighteen years . I
like living here ,
because there were many friendly
neighbours
good with each other , but it’s a great pity that We will move away
soon . To tell a truth , I really
can’t bear to part from them .
11
When Father bought me a computer for a birthday
present
in last year, I felt very excited. As we all know,
computers
are getting more usefully nowadays. Much
information
can be stored in it. We can learn what has lately
happened
in the world on the Internet. People had to do lots of work 80. ____________
which was very danger. Now, computers can do it
instead.
When an exam is come, I do exercises on my
computer.
Then it will correct them but tell me the right
answers.
It is convenient for me to prepare for the exam
than
before. The computer have become a real friend of
mine.
12
Good morning, everyone. Yesterday I received a letter from
a elderly gentleman. He told me the other day he
saw
that some student in our school uniform crowded
onto a
bus without waiting their turns. On the bus they
refuse
to offer their seats for old people. What was
worse, they
even said dirty words to each other. I am very
much sorry
for this. Today’s youth are tomorrow’s old people.
Respect
the old and caring for the young is a fine
tradition of our
Chinese. Every one of us have the responsibility
to keep it
up. I hope that you can learn something from this
incident
and you will have good manners whether you are
inside or
outside the school. Thank you.
13
Hello!
I’m Hannah, is the former Editor of Kiwibox’s Life
& People section.
I’ve now moved and became the Senior Editor of
Books & School.
A little about me you may not know: I am 17- year
– old high school
junior from Arizona. I’ve been on Kiwibox for
January of 2004,
which I became a reporter. Outside of Kiwibox, my
hobbies include
music, writing and just hanging out and try to get
through high school.
I’m really happily to be a part of the Books
& School section.
I love to read and write, so book reviews are
always a lot of funs.
If you have any questions or comments about this
section, I’d
love to answer it. You can reach me at
gingermulatta.
14
Henry Royce did not like his car, that ran badly
and
often broke up. So he decided to make better car
himself,
and in 1904 he produced his first new model.
Charles Rolls,
a car maker, was very interesting in Royce’s car,
and soon
Rolls and Royce go into business together. One of
their first
model was the Silver Ghost. In 1907, a Silver
Ghost broke
the world’s record by drive 14,371 miles without
breaking
down once. After the drive, it was cost just
over
£2 to put
the car back into perfect condition.
This is not surprising that
the Silver Ghost was regarded
“the best car in the
world”.
15
How much times do you spend with your
parents?
When did you last tell them what is on your
mind?
Your parents are your dearest people in the
world
when you are young. And they always care of you
deep. But even though many children still
love
their mum and dad, families may become more
close
as you get older. The end of the year is a time
for families
to get together. Have you ever thought what you
can
show your parents that you love them? Find
chance
and do something for them or to have a sincere
talk with
them. If you can do this, your parents will be
very happy.
16
“Practice makes
perfect”
was an old saying . It tells us
that it
does not any matter if we are slow at doing
something . As
long as we keep on trying and practice ,
we’ll do a good job
in the end . The saying is especial useful in
English study .
Since a student is poor at speaking , he should
grasp every
chance to open mouth and speak English . His oral
English
may be excellent one day due to his hard works .
Not only is
the saying useful in English study , it is also
helpful in our
daily life . To an extent , it is no short cut in
doing everything
since key to success lies in
“Practice makes
perfect”.
17
At a Friday night, a poor young artist stood at
the gate of the
subway station and played his violin with large
piece of paper on
the ground.Before long , he was surrounding with people, who
were all attracted by the word on that paper. It
said,“ last night,
a gentleman put an important thing into my hat by
mistaken. Please
come to claim it soon.” Seeing this , people
wondered why it
be. After about half an hour, a man came and
brought back his lottery
which won a prize of
$500,000. Later someone
asked the violinist:
“ Why don’t you take the
lottery ticket for yourself? ”He said,
“While I don’t have much
money, I live happily. However , I lose
honesty, I won’t be happy forever.”
18
“Ding-ling-ling…” the
bell rang, announced the end of
school. One by one, the students left their school
or went
home. Some rode their bike, some went by bus, and
others
went on foot. On the way, John saw one of her
classmates
riding a bike. He asked him take him home on his
bike.
When they came to a crossing, an accident was
happened.
A big red truck moved quickly up to them. John was
so
frightened that he jumped off the bike all of
sudden. The
truck knocked him onto the ground. He was terrible
injured
and sent to hospital at once. That is important
for us all to
follow the traffic regulations for our own safety.
19
A few months after returning the US from Germany,
I took
part in a college course in French. Since I have
learned to 77. _______
speak German good in Germany, I thought that it
might be 78. _______
interested to begin studying another language. At
the first 79. _______
class, the teacher asked us to do a pronunciation
exercise, 80. _______
in which he would say one word or two in French,
and each 81. _______
student would do their best to copy. When he got
to me, he
kept having me to say more words, and I finally
asked him
why. "I find it great funs. It's the first time
I've heard an
American speak French with a German accent." he
explained it. 85. _______
20
One day I happened to find a chatting room on
my QQ, there people were chatting in English . I
tried
to chat with some of them . To my surprised . I
found
the oral English of some junior students were
better
than me . I asked them for advice and they told me
to practise more on QQ. But every day after that I
would spend one hour practise my oral English on
QQ.
Day by day I learned from many useful words and
expressions . With time went by , I found that I
could
even communicate some college students freely
.
[参考答案]
1
76.from
—of/about
80.him—them
85.happier—happy
2
76.去掉but
81.Doing→Do
3
76. went
→goes
80. see
→read
85. very →more
4
56.去掉me
59. that
—what
62.did—do
5
77.together后加with
80.pulled改为pushed
84.which改为where
6
76. went/\→for go后可以接v-ing; to do sth.; for sth.
77. well→fine/nice well作“健康”讲是adj.,作“好”讲是adv.。
78.could→clouds应该用复数,否则为…was not a cloud
79.blown→blowing start后可以接to do或doing.
80.去掉were此处应该用主动语态
81.but→so前后为因果关系。
82.第一个a→an略。
83.√
84.must→should, must have done表示现在对过去的推测;should have done表示过去该做的事而没有做,且带有责备意味。
85.去掉第二个to but前面有do的不同形式时,后面的不定式不带to。
7
I visited my aunt in the countryside near the city last week.
I was surprised to see that great changes had been
taken place
in the countryside. Take my aunt’s family for
example. We
supply precious trees and flowers to the stores in
the city and
have over ten workers working for themselves.
Their family’s
income reached as much
∧100,000 yuan last year.
Nor only
did they have a house, a car and computers, they
can also afford
a trip abroad every year. When asking what else
they needed
most, they said that they wanted to learn a few
English so that
they could do business with foreigners directly.
To their delighted,
my cousin can use that he has learned from
university to help
them with overseas trade.
8
76. much
改成more
或much
后加more
79.down
后加upon/on
82. watches
改成watching
9
76.how改为what
79.正确
82.yourself改为you
85. interesting改为interested
10
76.
去掉第2个it
80. making
—made
84. good—well
11
76.for→as
12
Good morning, everyone. Yesterday I received a letter from
a elderly gentleman. He told me the other day he
saw
that some student in our school uniform crowded
onto a
bus without waiting their turns. On the bus they
refuse
to offer their seats for old people. What was
worse, they
even said dirty words to each other. I am very
much sorry
for this. Today’s youth are tomorrow’s old people.
Respect
the old and caring for the young is a fine
tradition of our
Chinese. Every one of us have the responsibility
to keep I
up. I hope that you can learn something from this
incident
and∧you will have good manners whether you are inside
or
outside the school. Thank you.
13
76.is the
→the
79.for→since
83.funs→fun
14
76.that—which
79.interesting—interested
81.model—models
83.Without
“was”
85.regarded ^ as (considered)
15
76. time---times
80. deep---deeply
84.a^chance
16
“Practice makes
perfect”
was an old saying . It tells us
that it
does not any matter if we are slow at doing
something . As
long as we keep on trying and practice ,
we’ll do a good job
in the end . The saying is especial useful in English study . 79.especially
Since a student is poor at speaking , he should
grasp every
chance to open
∧mouth and speak English
. His oral English
may be excellent one day due to his hard works .
Not only is
the saying useful in English study , it is also
helpful in our
daily life . To an extent , it is no short cut in
doing everything
since
∧key to success lies
in
“Practice makes
perfect”.
17
76.第一个at改为on
80.mistaken改为mistake
85.if后加I
18
“Ding-ling-ling…”
the bell rang, announced the
end of
school. One by one, the students left their school
or went
home. Some rode their bike, some went by bus, and
others
went on foot. On the way, John saw one of her
classmates
riding a bike. He asked him /\ take him home on
his bike.
When they came to a crossing, an accident was
happened.
A big red truck moved quickly up to them. John was
so
frightened that he jumped off the bike all of /\
sudden. The
truck knocked him onto the ground. He was terrible
injured
and sent to hospital at once. That is important
for us all to
follow the traffic regulations for our own safety.
19
76. returning
∧àto 77.
haveàhad
80.√
84. funsàfun
20
76. right
79. were—was
82. practise—practising
84.
As—With or went-going