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短文改错一直是许多同学非常头疼的题型,做题时总是无从下手,失分太多或者不能满分。其原因当然在于基础较差,但对该题型的认识不全面、答题技巧的缺失也是很大的原因。今天,我们就通过高考真题来全方位来认识一下短文改错,后面有五套2016高考短文改错的真题、答案和解析,同学们要认真做一下!
一. 题型解读
短文改错题检测考生发现、判断、纠正文章错误的能力,进而考察学生的词法、句法及行文逻辑等方面的水平,考察学生在语篇中综合运用英语的能力。
二. 命题特点
2. 错误类型相对稳定(错词、多词、缺词三种类型)
2. 考点覆盖面广、分布合理3)难度保持平稳。
三. 考查类型
错词、多词、缺词
四. 考点分布
五. 应试技巧
通读全文,掌握大意;分句阅读,整句找错;反复通读,复查验证。
六. 解题注意要点
1.
核对错项时,若的确有一时难以改出的地方,可以参考所改动项是否基本符合“1:1:8”的比例。即多1词,缺1词,错词8个。
2. 核对改正的语法项目是否有重复。因为短文改错往往覆盖面广,一般不会出现重复考查某个语法点的现象。
3. 核对答题符号是否规范,位置是否准确,看看有无遗漏符号,忽略字母大小写和拼写等问题。
Passage 1(2016•全国Ⅰ)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. Though
not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area. It is
always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had
to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is
honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high
quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never
dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes
that our business will grow steady.
Passage 2(2016•全国Ⅱ)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
删除:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about
how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home
and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is
no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little
about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view
and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates
suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it
is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a
lot.
Passage 3(2016•全国Ⅲ)
The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me.
They were also the best and worse years in my life. At the first, I
thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself.
However, my parents didn't seem to think such. They always tell me
what to do and how to do it. At one time, I ever felt my parents
couldn't understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I
showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am
leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still
want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.
Passage 4(2016•四川)
It is Mother's Day today. Though it's a western festival, it's
popular in China now.
Mom has a full-time job, so she has to do most of the houseworks.
She is a great mother. Both Dad or I planned to do something on
Mother's Day. We get up early in the morning. Dad cleaned the
house, and then went on shopping. When he came back, I found a
bunch of flowers in her hand.I asked Mom to stay in the sitting
room and I cooked in kitchen.The dishes what I cooked were
Mom'sfavoritest. At dinner, we said to her, Happy Mother's Day! Mom
was grateful and moving.
Passage 5(2016•浙江)
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When I was a very young children, my father created a regular
practice I remember well years late. Every time he arrived home at
end of the day, we'd greet her at the door. He would ask who we was
and pretend not to knowing us. Then he and my mother would have had
a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day
and hers. While they chat, my father would lift my sister and me up
to sit in the top of the fridge. It was both excited and
frightening to be up there!
My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there.
Passage 1
1. that→where
【解析】考查宾语从句的连词用法。由句子结构可知,介词to之后为宾语从句。从句谓语是不及物动词live。故用where引导。
2. 去掉but
【解析】考查从属连词与并列连词。从属连词though不可与并列连词but连用。
3. had→have
【解析】考查语境中的时态运用。根据上下文语境可知此处要用一般现在时。
4. honest→honesty
【解析】考查名词作表语。由句意“他成功的关键是诚信”可知应当用名词形式。
5. or→and
【解析】考查并列连词的用法。根据句意可知二者之间为并列关系而非选择关系。
6. using→used
【解析】考查固定短语的用法。be used for“用来做”,为固定短语。
7. 在dreams之后加上of或about
【解析】考查短语动词。固定短语dream of/about (doing) sth.的意思是“梦想做某事”。
8. the→a
【解析】考查代词的用法。in a short period of time为固定词组,意思是“短时间内”。
9. our→his
【解析】考查冠词的用法。短文介绍了my uncle诚信经营餐馆的事情,故将our改为his。
10. steady→steadily
【解析】考查副词的用法。修饰谓语动词用副词。
Passage 2
1. how→what
【解析】考查疑问词的用法。我和同学正在谈论假期里做什么。固定表达what to do,如果用how结构为how to do
sth.]
2.chose→choose
【解析】考查动词形式。根据语法知识可知,情态动词can后要用动词原形。
3. take→taking
【解析】考查非谓语动词的用法。此处为between...and...结构,根据前面的staying at
home可知,此处也要用动名词形式,与前面保持一致。
4. but→and
【解析】考查连词的用法。如果呆在家里,感觉舒适,还不花钱。根据句意可知,此处应是并列关系,而不是转折关系。
5. world前加the
【解析】考查定冠词的用法。此处特指我们所生活的这个世界。
6. your→our
【解析】考查形容词性物主代词的用法。根据前面的主语we可知,此处要用our,表示“我们能够开阔我们的视野”。
7. knowledges→knowledge
【解析】考查不可数名词的用法。knowledge为不可数名词,没有复数形式。
8. 去掉can或can→should
【解析】考查虚拟语气。suggest表示“建议”,后面的宾语从句要用should
do形式,should可以省略,故答案有两种改法。
9. thought→think
【解析】考查一般现在时的用法。我认为这是一个好主意。根据上下文可知,此处并不是过去的看法,而是现在的看法。
10. many→much
【解析】考查代词的用法。这样不会花很多钱。cost much花费很多。此处也可理解为much money的省略。
Passage 3
【语篇导读】本文主要讲述了青少与父母之间的关系。
1. year→years
【解析】此处指13~19 岁的年龄,故用复数。
2. worse→worst
【解析】与前面的best并列,此处应用最高级。
3. 去掉the
【解析】at first 固定短语。
4. yourself→myself
【解析】根据句意,此处指“我自己”。
5. such→so
【解析】so 指已经提到的事。
6. tell→told
【解析】此处应用过去时态。
7. freely→free
【解析】此处应用形容词作表语。
8. wear→wearing
【解析】此处用动名词作介词的宾语。
9. to→for
【解析】固定搭配 leave for 去……
10. whenever后加I
【解析】whenever引导状语从句,从句缺少主语 I。
Passage 4
1. so→but
【解析】前后句之间为转折关系。
2. houseworks→housework
【解析】housework是不可数名词。
3. or →and
【解析】both...and是固定搭配。
4. get→got
【解析】这里说的是发生在过去的事情,因此用一般过去时。
5. 去掉on
【解析】go shopping去买东西。
6. her→his
【解析】爸爸去购物,从句主语是he,因此物主代词形式用his。
7. kitchen前加the
【解析】上文虽未提及kitchen,但听话者一定知其所指,因此,kitchen前加定冠词。
8. what→which/that或去掉what
【解析】引导定语从句,并在从句中作宾语,指物,用关系代词that/which,也可省略。
9. favoritiest→favorite
【解析】favorite为无等级形容词。
10. moving→moved
【解析】moving多用来修饰事物,moved用来指人。
Passage 5
1. children→child
【解析】因为前面有不定冠词a,所以这里用单数。故children改成child。
2. late→later
【解析】late是形容词“迟的”,或副词“迟地”,但是“一段时间后面应该接later”,表示“……时间以后”。故late改成later。
3. at后面加the
【解析】at the end of 为固定搭配。
4. her→him
【解析】根据上文可知我们每天在门口迎接爸爸。用him指代my father,作greet的宾语。故her改成him。
5. was→were
【解析】这句话的主语是we,谓语用复数,而且这篇文章是作者回忆小时候的事情,用一般过去时。故was改成were。
6. knowing→know
【解析】pretend后面接不定式作宾语,这里是否定式pretend not to do。故knowing改成know。
7. 去掉had
【解析】would do 表示“过去常常做”。
8. chat→chatted
【解析】根据主句内容my father would lift my sister
可知while引导的时间状语从句用一般过去时。故chat改成chatted。
9. in→on
【解析】on the top of...为固定搭配,意为“在……顶部”。故in改成on。
10. excited→exciting
【解析】这句话的主语是形式主语it,真正的主语是to be up
there,主语是物的时候,表语应该用现在分词形式的形容词。故excited改成exciting。
【3年高考2年模拟短文改错题集】
专题十五 短文改错
模拟精选题
Passage 1 (2016•山西重点中学协作体模拟)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Having a good teacher do mean a lot to us students and I am lucky
enough to have the oneMiss Brown, my English teacher.
Miss Brown is a charming lady always worn a big smile on her face.
In the first class she introduced her and then asked us to say
something about ourselves with English. When it was my turn, I felt
too shy and fearful that I didn’t dare to say a word. She came up
to me and said, Don’t afraid. You can make it. Just have a try. At
last, I did it quite good. She praised me for that I had done.
Never shall I forgot my first English class in senior high
school.
答案
Having a good teacher
Miss Brown is a charming lady always
Passage 2 (2016•汉中市二次质检)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Smiling is auniversal language but can give us courage, confidence
and comfort.
I still remember how upset I am when it was my turn to recite a
poem before class.Feel nervous and shy, I forgot almost everything.
I decided to give up, but all my classmates, especial my teacher
kept smiling at me encouragingly. Their smile warmed me so much
that I got over the difficulty and eventually made it up. I think
smiling not only makes us happy but also help build up our
confidence. Furthermore, they will improve the relationship between
us. It is smiling that brings harmony us. Only when you smile at
the world does the world smile at you. Therefore, keep smiling and
show your best to the world.
答案
Smiling is auniversal language
I still remember how upset I
Passage 3 (2016•临沂一模)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
This morning I saw off my aunt at railway station.There were many
passenger in the waiting room.I saw an old lady crying sad because
she had lost her ticket and not able to afford another one.I was
thinking about helping her when a man come up to comfort her.Then
he bought her a ticket with his own money.The old Lady was so
moving that she could hardly say a word.She grasped his hand and
asked for his name or address.But he only smile and said,“It’s my
pleasure.” Then he left away quickly.I was greatly moved by such a
man he warmed others with his love.
答案
This morning I saw off my aunt at
Passage 4 (2016•株洲市质检)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Hi Lana,
I am 61 years old and I am fromNew Zealand. I start teaching in
China last February.I decided that I reached 60 years I would like
to do something different. I was lucky to have got a degree in
English, that helped me find a job as a teacher in China. Now I
work with two Canadian teacher. One, 57, has been here for four
years, and the other, 63, have been teaching here for 6 years. He
married with a lovely Chinese lady. The Chinese people are
hard-working but the students are so willing to learn.
How an interesting country to live in!
I feel safer here than anywhere I lived. I have found her tips on
teaching so usefully.
Thank you!
Dave
答案
Hi Lana,
I am 61 years old and I am from New Zealand. I
an interesting country to live in!
I feel safer here than anywhere I lived. I have
found
Thank you!
Dave
Passage 5 (2016•宁夏六盘山二模)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Joe,
Thanks for you mail. I’m glad to know you were interested in the
2017 Florida Winter Camp. It will be held from January 27 to
February 13, during that time you will get a wonderful experience.
You will have chances to improve your speaking English in the
courses provided. Also, activity are arranged for you to spend
weekends together with your host family, but you can learn American
English in authentic situations. However, a trip to the local
Disneyland will certain add up the fun of the camp. Join in the
camp and you will have the knowledge of American culture and life.
You are sure to benefit from it.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
答案
Dear Joe,
Thanks for
Yours truly,
Li Hua
Passage 6 (2016•漳州八校联考)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Peter,
I am writing to ask that you are able to do me a favor.I want to
have a penfriend,hopefully,a girl in her early twenties,and with
interests similarly to mine.In my mind,he is someone interesting in
traveling,swimming,and playing table tennis.However,it would be
better for her to have a pet dog as I have been kept one at home
for some time.With such a pen friend,I hope I can share with her
our experiences in traveling,taking care pets,or whatever we have
in common.I believed I will improve my English by doing so and
learn more about her countries.I am looking forward to hear from
you soon.
Best regards,
Li Hua
答案
Dear Peter,
I am writing to ask
Best regards,
Li Hua
Passage 7 (2015•潍坊3月)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Jack,
Welcome to my school!Upon your arrival,there will be a party for
you organizing by my classmates.You may attend to English classes
to feel a differently learning style.After that,you can go to your
host family that you can experience the Chinese way of life.You can
have meals together chatting about whatever interest you.
The host family will also show you off some famous scenic spots.You
can see people selling kites everywhere because our city was home
to kites.There are varieties of kites to choose.So isn’t that a
good idea to buy some for your friends?Write to me unless you have
any questions about the schedule.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
Dear Jack,
Welcome to my school!Upon your arrival,there will be a party for
you
The host family will also show you
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 8 (2015•大连一模)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In the summer holiday,we travelled to Qingdao and paid visit to my
uncle there.It’s a long and bored journey.But the moment I
arrived,I fall in love with the city.It’s such beautiful a city
that I can hardly find any word to describe it.The streets are
cleaning and the sky is blue.If you walk along the coast,you can
feel the wind to blowing on your face.The sea is vast and sometimes
you can find a boat or a ship.You may also do some fishing as far
as it is permitted.Moreover,I think the driver there drive too fast
in the street.You can never be too careless when crossing the
street.
答案
In the summer holiday,we travelled to Qingdao and
paid
Passage 9 (2015•山东省实验中学模拟)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As we all know,everyone have a dream.I have dreamed of being a
doctor since I entered into the primary school.Nowadays with modern
life go rapidly,many people suffer from different kind of
diseases,both mentally and physically.As a result,doctors are in
great need at home and abroad.My dream is to become successful
doctor,helping to save people’s lives.Although to be a good doctor
was very difficult,I will do whatever I can to keep everyone
health.To make my dream come true,I have told me over and over
again that I’ll concentrate more to studies.After all,only by
working hardly can one succeed.
答案
As we all know,everyone
Passage 10 (2015•泰安期末)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I’d like to give you some advices on how to learn Chinese
well.
First,it was important to take a Chinese course,as you’ll be able
to learn from the teacher and practising with your fellow
students.Then,it also help to watch TV and read books,newspapers
and magazines in the Chinese whenever possible.It will make you
familiar to Chinese characters and enlarge your vocabulary even
before you notice it!
Besides,it is a good idea learn and sing Chinese songs,because by
doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easy.You can
also make more Chinese friends,they will tell you a lot about China
and help you learn Chinese.Try to speak Chinese as many as
possible.
答案
I’d like to give you some
First,it
Besides,it is a good idea
Passage 11 (2014•昆明一模)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It’s pleasure for me to have a chance to make a short speech
today.I have found that some of my classmates study deeply into the
night.What’s more,they did not spare any time to exercise during
the day.But they are less energetic than the others in class and
can’t always stay focusing on their lessons.Worse than that,some of
them seldom have breakfast,with which is also a bad habit and will
certainly do harm for their health.
Obvious,it’s important for us to have enough sleep and a proper
diet.We must learn to make wise use of our time,and only in this
way can we keep fit and study well.I hope my advices can help
you.
Thanks for listen.
答案
It’s
,it’s important for us to have enough sleep and a proper diet.We
must learn to make wise use of our time,and only in this way can we
keep fit and study well.I hope my
Thanks for .
创新导向题
Ⅰ.原创新题
Passage 1
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear teachers and schoolmates,
It’s great honor for me to be here today and share my experience of
learning English with you.I want to learn English well to take a
better job,but I learn English in some difference ways.In class,I
learn new words,useful ex-pressions and grammar and take efforts to
understand the texts under the help of our English teacher.After
the class,I do a lot of exercises prepare for the college entrance
examination.You also read news and watch videos on the Internet and
from other source.I have a lot of fun especial when learning
English with cartoon movies.
Thanks for listening!
答案
Dear teachers and schoolmates,
It’s
Thanks for listening!
Passage 2
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It seemed that everyone is studying hard for the College Entrance
Examination.There are such many books to read.Nowadays,many a
parent expect too much of their children.They hope their sons or
daughters study hard in order to get great colleges.It is the
reason what parents are strict with their children.They don’t know
what they do with has become a heavy burden on their children.On my
opinion,that isn’t right.Instead,I think parents should create a
proper learned environment for the children and allow me to play
from time to time.Only in this way can the child do their best and
succeed at last.
答案
It
Passage 3
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The day before yesterday,my father invited to a restaurant by his
good friends.At the restaurant they didn’t stop drinking until both
of them were drunk.My father didn’t realize the serious of driving
a car after drinking.He decided to send his friends to their
home.And then he drove home.While driven home,my father felt
uneasy.Before he realized that would happen,my father run into a
house near the road.The police came and examined the amount of
alcohol my father had drunk.It was over the normally standard.So
the police fined my father.After that,my father regretted what he
had done but made up his mind never to drink again before
driving.
答案
The day before yesterday,my father
Ⅱ.预测导向题
Passage 1 (2016•沈阳二中月考)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Many young boys and girls had the habit of smoking,though they are
middle school student.As we all know,smoking do harm to human
beings.More and more people have realized that how serious this
problem is.But they are never boring with it.Some people think
smoking is a kind of fashion,and other think smoking can refresh
himself.In fact,smoking causes many illnesses.The most serious
illness is caused by smoking is lung cancer.Meanwhile,smoking is
the waste of money.What’s worse,careless smokers may cause danger
fires.
答案
Many young boys and girls
Passage 2 (2016•河北定兴中学月考)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I went shopping yesterday afternoon.It is seven o’clock when I was
going home by bus.The
答案
I went shopping yesterday afternoon.It
Passage 3 (2015•青岛一模)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The saying that practice makes perfect mean that after you have
plenty of practice in what you were doing,you will be perfect in
it.If you want improve your study and work,remembering that the
most important thing is how to put the knowledge you have learned
into practice.For example,when learning a language,though you can
make full use for your talent,practice is necessary.If you only
learn grammar rules by the heart and don’t do enough exercise,it’s
certain that you can’t understand the language perfectly.But if you
real practise a lot,maybe you will understand them much better.In
this way,you can apply that you have learned better.
答案
The saying that practice makes perfect
Passage 4 (2015•贵阳模拟)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I’m very grateful for my parents.They not only gave me life,but
also brought me up with endless love and support,feel so proud of
my every improvements.I still remember once I was seriously
ill.They were so worrying and almost kept me company the whole
night.Now I’m Grade 3. Lucky for me,my parents can understand my
stressful condition but often communicate with me with encouraging
words.Furthermore,they give me enough personal space,which I
appreciate it so much.
I should study hard.When I grow up,I will become an useful person
and make my parents lived a happy life.
答案
I’m very grateful
I should study hard.When I grow up,I will become
Passage 5 (2015•洛阳模拟)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
A recent survey shows that many students have got into some bad
living habit,which do great harm to their health.
As we all know it,health is more important than wealth.Without a
healthy body,you cannot do everything even if you are a
millionaire.In order keep healthy,it’s necessary to get rid of
unhealthy habits and form good ones.
First of all,eat a healthy breakfast is a great way to start the
day.You should eat more fruit and vegetables,which are rich of
vitamins.Secondly,getting enough sleep.Early to bed and early to
rise make you feel great all day long.Lastly,take exercise every
day to make your body strong.
As long as you form health habits and keep them,you’ll have a
strong body and live the healthy life.
答案
A recent survey shows that many students have got into some bad
living ,which do great harm to their health.
As we all know it,health is more important than wealth.Without a
healthy body,you cannot do
First of all, a healthy breakfast is a great way to start the
day.You should eat more fruit and vegetables,which are
rich
As long as you form
Passage 6 (2014•宝鸡一模)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线(____),并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Here are the information about Manchester University.It is about
200 miles far away from London,and it has a very big schoolyard.You
can live in the school or near the school.They have all sorts of
course.I’m sure you will find one you like it.I know you are
particular interested in Human Rights.So I will see that there is
anything in their websites.I’ll send my friend Charlie meet you at
the airport when you arrived.You met him a few years ago,but he has
changed a lot since then.Both your aunt or I look forward to seeing
you again.
答案
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