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试着写一首英文诗《Today is Yesterday》

(2010-09-16 09:37:28)
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分类: 老爱写诗

Today is yesterday

By Lao Ai

 

Today turns away, it’s yesterday,

Everything seems okay even having lost its way.

The darkness not coming alone there stood a stone,

Where the lights went was still unkown,

I only heard from my heart deeply by phone.

Towards the sound I saw a block of wood ,

Soon the face left without any mood,

Legs ran far away, arms cut themselves out,

And the body couldn’t find a mouth for shout.

But the body was not the Loard, the Loard was not the God,

The wood was still a wood, and I was still good.

That was yesterday that I forgot today,

Maybe today is yesterday and yesterday is everday.

 

补记:王妃说写了别译成中文,味道不一样,小爱觉得对,所以把译文删掉了。

 

又:唐大哥说,诗歌如果不译出来,不是只能给懂英文的人玩味了吗?译出来又有何妨?小爱觉得有道理,就重新把译文贴上去。

 

译文:

《今天是昨天》

文:老爱

 

今天转身离开,那是昨天,

黑暗并非独自降临,那里立着石块,

光线去了哪里?这依然是迷,

我只是从电话里听到,深深的心跳。

顺着声音,我目光如钜,看到一块木头,

脸很快就毫无表情地离去,

双腿跑得远远的,手臂切断了自己,

身体找不到尖叫的嘴巴。

但身体不是老天,老天不是上帝,

木头依然是木头,我依然安好。

那是昨天,我忘了今天,

或许今天就是昨天,昨天就是每一天。

 

备注:唐凯大哥与无心剑兄长两位给小爱提出来宝贵意见,小爱以上诗中已经吸收了他们的部分意见,在此表示感谢。

 

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