试着写一首英文诗《Today is Yesterday》
(2010-09-16 09:37:28)
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◆Today is yesterday
By Lao Ai
Today turns away, it’s yesterday,
Everything seems okay even having lost its way.
The darkness not coming alone there stood a stone,
Where the lights went was still unkown,
I only heard from my heart deeply by phone.
Towards the sound I saw a block of wood ,
Soon the face left without any mood,
Legs ran far away, arms cut themselves out,
And the body couldn’t find a mouth for shout.
But the body was not the Loard, the Loard was not the God,
The wood was still a wood, and I was still good.
That was yesterday that I forgot today,
Maybe today is yesterday and yesterday is everday.
补记:王妃说写了别译成中文,味道不一样,小爱觉得对,所以把译文删掉了。
又:唐大哥说,诗歌如果不译出来,不是只能给懂英文的人玩味了吗?译出来又有何妨?小爱觉得有道理,就重新把译文贴上去。
译文:
《今天是昨天》
文:老爱
今天转身离开,那是昨天,
黑暗并非独自降临,那里立着石块,
光线去了哪里?这依然是迷,
我只是从电话里听到,深深的心跳。
顺着声音,我目光如钜,看到一块木头,
脸很快就毫无表情地离去,
双腿跑得远远的,手臂切断了自己,
身体找不到尖叫的嘴巴。
但身体不是老天,老天不是上帝,
木头依然是木头,我依然安好。
那是昨天,我忘了今天,
或许今天就是昨天,昨天就是每一天。
备注:唐凯大哥与无心剑兄长两位给小爱提出来宝贵意见,小爱以上诗中已经吸收了他们的部分意见,在此表示感谢。