2013年12月大学英语四级作文真题评析（二）

    作文二：

     For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people’s life and explain the consequence of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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    范文一:

The Overusing of Cell Phones

     This picture portrays an ironic situation: on the road, stands a man, who is completely concentrating on his cell phone whereas using a stick for direction, which implies the unprecedented popularity or even overusing cell phones nowadays.

     Exaggerated as the picture is, the phenomenon behind it is rather thought-provoking. With the development of high-tech equipment, especially smart phones, people in growing numbers tend to become addicted to the excessive use of them. According to a survey carried out in China Daily several days ago, almost 47% of citizens explain that they would experience certain kind of anxiety without cell phones at hand. Meanwhile, the overusing cell phones firstly would exert detrimental impact on the health of us. What's worse, it would perform a negative character in interpersonal relationship since we have less time to communicate.

     Judging from the evidence above, certain measures should be taken. Firstly, certain institutions in China should launch relevant campaigns to limit the excessive use of cell phones. Moreover, we, as college students, should put emphasis on it right from ourselves as a start.

（178 words)

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    范文二:

     As the drawing presents, there is a man walking across the street absorbedly focusing on his cell phone without noticing the surroundings. This sort of phenomenon is not uncommon and rare in some metropolis, especially among the youngsters.

     What the picture illustrates is the prevailing situation that has long existed in today's China. That is the mobile phone obsession. With the advent of information age, people are becoming increasingly fascinated on the electronic products, especially the cell phones. Not surprisingly, you could easily notice that most of us are obsessed in sending messages, playing online games with their mobile phones. It cannot be denied that this phenomenon may negatively impact the relationship among people, and therefore they will become estranged and isolated.

     Personally, in view of the overuse of mobile phones, I hold that we individuals should raise the necessary awareness that good relationships are reinforced by sincere and face-to-face communication.

(151 words)

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    范文三:

     This cartoon reflects a provoking-thought social phenomenon ---- overusing the mobile phone in our lives. Even when crossing the street, people still keep looking at their mobile phone. Ironically, they use walking sticks in order to see. This is never an uncommon occurrence and exists here and there. Obviously, "Addition to Mobile Phone" has become a popular word these days.

     The harmfulness of overusing mobile phone can be summarized as below. To begin with, it leads to countless health problems including short sight and autism. These diseases all have root causes in overusing cell phone. What’s more, the harmfulness is as much about our safety as it is about our health. The overusing mobile phone can change our lives patterns and overlook the danger around us.

     Health experts are up in arms over the overusing the mobile phone. It is high time to change such uncool habit. Only in this way can we eradicate the risk of overusing cell phone.

（162 words) 

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    范文四:

     It is frequently observed that many people keep looking down at their mobile phones whatever they are doing. It is true that mobile phones have brought great convenience to us as we can send short messages, check e-mails, surf the Internet, or watch videos almost anywhere. However, the overuse of mobile phones also leads to some serious problems.

     The over-dependence on mobile phones can harm the relationship among friends and family. With mobile phones, people do not talk as much as before. For example, sometimes at dinner tables, instead of chatting and laughing with each other, many people choose to chat with other friends online. In other words, mobile phones help people contacting friends far away more easily at the expense of reducing the communication with those who are sitting right next to them.

     In conclusion, mobile phone can be a useful tool in modern life, but overusing it damages interpersonal relationship. There is no point to lose our intimacy with friends and family to modern technology.

（167 words)

    点评：

    本题漫画探讨手机的广泛使用对人们生活的影响。话题贴近日常生活，难度中等。题目要求简述手机在人们生活中越来越重要的角色，并解释过度使用手机可能带来的后果。

    考生主要可以从以下几个角度思考：

         1. 对健康的危害；

         2. 对人际关系的负面影响；

         3. 对个人学习、发展的阻碍。

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