Areas

Items

Points

Content

(内容)

(total：20 points)

1. Relevant to the topic (与主题相关)   0--5

2. clear ideas     (观点明确)         0--5

3. well-developed (很好地展开)        0--5

4. detailed description (描写具体)      0--5

Language

(语言)

(total: 20 points)

1. Mechanics (spelling, punctuation, capitalization) few errors (拼写，标点，大小写少见错误)

 (0.5 point for each error)

2. Correct use of simple structures （正确使用简单的句型结构）(0.5 point for each error)

3. Use of complex structures with few errors  （复杂的句型结构较少有错）(0.25 point for each error)

4. Variety of expressions (使用不同的表达) 0--3

5. Use of idioms or proverbs （能使用成语或谚语）0--2

Construction （组织结构）

(total: 10 points)

1.      well-organized paragraphs (合理安排段落)  0--4

2. Correct use of linking words (e.g. however, what’s more, etc) (正确使用连接词) 0—4                    

3. Use of a diversity of devices to engage the reader (e.g. imagery, metaphor, humor, etc) (使用多种写作手法吸引读者)  0--2                                      

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