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英语口语风采大赛点评

(2011-06-13 16:56:16)
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分类: 烟子涂鸦

I'm very glad to be the judge today. It's terrific to see you dress formally and well prepared for the English speech today.

Today's competition is exciting and successful!

It's worth metioning that some speakers gave us a fantastic speech with an impressive beginning, ending or the free talk. Furthermore, some speakers were enthusiastic throughout the speech. Some speakers made good eye contact with the audience and used appropriate body language in the speech. No 6 and No. 7: you made your speech more wonderful and more perfect with your body language. You looked cool! And some speakers'pronunciation and intonation are good.

Here's some advice for the speakers today.

I think you need to choose better English articles which are suitable for you. You are so young. You are just children. You can choose something interesting and easy. I think stories are more attractive than the boring articles. No. 2: your topic is good---Success Is On The Other Side. But there are so many new words and quite a few difficult words in your speech. Maybe you are very good at English, and you really made a good speech today. But I think if you chose an easier one, perhaps you could do it better. I like No 5's article. You talked about the friendship. A friendship is important to us all. We are all familiar with this kind of topic. It's easy and it can make the audience interested in your speech. I also like No. 6's article. You talked about your parents. Parents are the dearest persons to us all in the world. And when we talk about our parents, we have so much to say. We can easily make our speech full of love, feeling, emotion, affection, attachment and so on. These are all important in the speech. They can help you impress the audience.

Well, you also need to make more eye contact with the audience and have clear pronunciation. I have to say, some of you were a bit stiff without proper body language which was no good for impressing the audience, Some of you were a little shy. You were quite nervous, right?

Moreover, I really hope you can put more passion into your speech, and try to enrich it with more facial expression. Then surely, your speech would be fabulous!

However, I know all of the speakers are from Grade Seven. You have learnt English for less than one year. So at last, I want to say:you have done very well in today's English speech competition. Congratulations to you! And thank you for your wonderful speech!

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