雅思小鹏哥写作原创语料库： 仅为培养优秀运动员而建设体育设施的利弊

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【观点类】

Some countries construct sports facilities only for training top athletes, is it a positive or negative development？一些国家建设体育设施仅仅是为了培养顶尖运动员，这是积极的还是消极的？（2016年12月3日）

 

【相关考题】

Some countries achieve international sporting success by building specialized facilities only for the training of top athletes, instead of providing facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? 一些国家在国际上取得成功是通过建设体育设施，仅仅培养顶尖运动员，而不是提供人人都能使用的体育设施，这是积极的还是消极的？（2014年7月10日）

【写作立场】

我认为，仅为培养顶尖运动员而建设体育设施弊大于利，普及大众体育设施更值得推荐。

 

【思路拓展】

 

➊ 国家通过发展体育设培养专业运动员的利好

 

➀ 从积极角度而言，培养专业运动员可以使一个国家成为体育强国， 这是一个很好的提升国际影响力以及盈利的契机。例如，体育强国可以承办国际体育比赛，由电视转播，食宿餐饮，门票销售，旅游消费带来的机会可以创造巨大的经济价值。

 

➁ 专业运动员的成功即为竞技体育事业的成功，竞技的成功对于民众有教育意义。例如，我常常被专业运动员们不懈追求完美和不断自我超越的精神所感动。

 

➊ 国家普及大众体育设施的利好和理由

 

➀ 如何仅仅为培养专业运动员而建设体育设施，那么，受益的是小众人群，大多数民众无法享受到普及体育设施带来了利好，这对于光荣的纳税人而言是不公平的。

 

➁ 只有普及民众的体育设施，才能激发全民的健身热情，进而提高一个国家国民的基本素质以及健康指数。

 

【原创语料】

【变通表达】

1.        top athletes = elite sportsmen = eminent professional players 优秀的运动员

2.        athletic facilities = sports facilities = sports-related facilities体育设施

3.        cultivate = foster = nurture v. 培养

4.        sports events = sports games体育比赛

5.        build sports facilities for physical exercise = construct athletic facilities for physical exercise 建设用于健身的体育设施

 

【句法输入】

1.      is beneficial to … = exert a positive influence on … = can greatly conduce to …有利于……

2.      seen from positive aspect 从积极的角度而言

3.      on the downsides 从消极的角度而言

4.      in terms of … 在……方面

5.      my stand is that  … = it is my view that … 我的立场是……

 

【背景介绍】

To become a mighty country in terms of sports events is what many nations aspire after. That is the reason why numerous countries are keen on cultivating elite sportsmen via constructing sports facilities.成为竞技体育强国是很多国家所渴望的，这就是为什么很多国家热衷于通过建设体育设施培养精英运动员。

【解析】via 通过……

 

【争议焦点】

People have been debating, for many years, the pros and cons of constructing athletic facilities only for the purpose of cultivating eminent sportsmen without reaching any definite consensus. 很多年来，人们一直在争议发展体育设施仅为培养顶尖运动员的利弊，而未达成共识。

 

【写作立场】

Personally speaking, the demerits of zeroing in on the cultivation of professional athletes outweigh its possible merits, popularizing sports facilities for common people deserves more recommendations. 我认真专注于培养专业运动员的弊大于利，普及民众体育设施更加值得推荐。

 

【解析】

➀ zero in on 专注 ……

➁ … deserves more recommendations ……更加值得推荐

 

【论据语料】

1.      The triumph of professional athletes, to some extent, equals to the achievement of sports events career. 专业运动员的成功，在某种程度上，等同于体育事业的成功。

【解析】triumph n.成功, 胜利

 

2.      To nurture more exceptional professional players is a golden chance to improve a nation’s status in the international arena and thus help a country achieve economic profitability. 培养专业运动员使国家成为体育强国，这是一个很好的提高国际影响力以及盈利的契机。

 

3.      A nation with great competiveness in sports events stand more opportunities of biding for international sports undertaking such as Olympic Games or the World Cup. 体育强国有更多的机会承办国际性体育赛事，例如奥运会和世界杯。

【解析】bid for 申办，承办

 

4.      The possible chances generated by the sale of TV rights, accommodations, ticket sales and visitor expenditure could generate immense economic value. 由电视转播，食宿餐饮，门票销售，旅游消费带来的机会可以创造巨大的经济价值。

 

5.      The self-made spirit of those sportsmen’s has a key role to play in educating and inspiring the general public. To illustrate, I am often strongly inspired by athletes’ relentless pursuit of perfection and ceaseless self-improvement spirit. 专业运动们自我奋斗的精神对于教育和激励民众有积极的作用。例如，我个人经常被运动员们不懈追求完美和不断自我提升的精神所激励。

 

【解析】

➀ the self-made spirit 自我奋斗精神

➁ relentless pursuit of perfection 不懈追求完美

 

6. To provide common people with first-class sports facilities can create more opportunities of enhancing the heath index among the general public. By contrast, professional sports facilities could only serve small group of people. 为民众提供一流的体育设施可以创造更多提升民众健康指数的机会，相反，专业体育设施仅仅服务了小众人群。

【解析】the general public 大众

 

7. If only professional athletes can benefit from the construction of sports facilities, then this practice is an unfair allocation of the honorable tax-payers’ money. 如果仅仅专业运动员可以从建设体育设施中获益，那么，这种做法是对于光荣的纳税人的金钱的不公平分配。

 

8. Only when supporting the sports-related facilities for the common people can we fire the whole nation’s passion in terms of strengthening physical exercise. Meanwhile, this practice can improve the basic quality of a nation’s population, especially the health index. 只有普及民众的体育设施，才能激发全民的健身热情，进而提高一个国家的国民基本素质，尤其健康指数。

 

【解析】

➀ strengthen physical exercise 增强体育锻炼

 

➁ improve the basic quality of a nation’s population 提高国民的基本素质