雅思小鹏哥原创范文赏析:多元职业和候鸟生活好的利弊(11月7日预测题目)

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An increasing number people are changing careers during the working life. Do you think it is a positive or a negative development? 很多人一生中不断地改变他们的职业, 你认为是消极的还是积极的? (2014年6月21日)
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有谁愿躲在避风的港口,宁愿波涛汹涌的自由,风景在别处,他乡是故乡。候鸟是一种最精壮的鸟,它不安居一地,以迁徙为乐。对于随性随缘,追逐生命质量的人而言,落地处即是家乡,四海内皆可交友,他们深思熟虑地选择了自己渴望的生活方式,并且,愿意承担一切,仅仅为自由飞翔的梦想。
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很多的年轻人是被更好的工作机会和更现代的都市生活吸引,喜欢选择心仪的居住地,而不是久居故土。
异地择业生活,意味着不断地迎接挑战,多种职业技能学习的机会,叔叔保罗为例,日本留学和求职, 为了生产,学习厨技等多种技能来生存,丰富的工作的经验的积累,广阔的人脉资源。于生活而已,人可体味持久的新鲜感,找到自己真正喜爱的适合的城市:
无可否认,离开家乡,家庭纽带的分解以及友谊的淡化不可避免,因为空间的隔离使得老友和家人之间交流和交往的机会减少。或许有人认为,候鸟生活只是适合年轻时代,候鸟式的生活很难保障人的稳定的生活和持久的幸福感,但是,我想反驳的是,即使迁移,人亦可以成家立业,娶妻生子,广泛交友,感受幸福。
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【雅思小鹏哥原创范文赏析】
【首段】 背景介绍 + 争议焦点 + 作家立场
One of the traits of modern way of working is that people enjoy more freedom in selecting their dream jobs and places of residence. Thanks to the improvement of modern public transport and communication technology, many young adults are usually magnetized by splendid job opportunities and modernized lifestyle in new cities. Personally speaking, the merits of free job selection prevail over its possible downsides.
【解析】
1. One of the traits of modern way of working and lifestyle is that people enjoy more freedom in selecting their dream jobs and places of residence. 现代工作方式的重要特征之一就是人们在选择他们心仪的事业和梦想的住地的时候更加自由。
2. People have been pondering the pros and cons of migrant lifestyle bought about by the high-tech without reaching any definite consensus. 高科技的便利使人们可以像候鸟一样地生活,人们在思考其利弊,未能达成共识。
3. The merits of free job selection and migrant lifestyle prevail over its possible downsides 自由工作选择和候鸟生活的利大于弊
【二段】 利好的展开
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with the availability of new technology, people may get a
reasonable career in any favorite cities without considering
regional limits. No matter where one dwells in, he or she can keep
contact with their family members via the Internet or airplane
timely. Seen from positive aspects, many benefits can be acquired.
The most obvious merit is that multiple career choice and constant
change of residence means a broad range of working experience and
constant refreshment. Meanwhile, one can become more talented and
competent by taking up various jobs or living in different cities.
Also, regular change of jobs makes one excel professionally and
living in different cities greatly enriches one’s
experience of the world. Hence,
one can have brighter career and enjoy precious memory in the
future. Last,to
take up jobs in diverse cities enables one to have better personal
resources. A well-connected interpersonal network to some extent,
means more golden chances of job-promotion, comfortable salary and
even the room for career achievement.
However, some problems might ensue. First of all, the decomposition
of family bonds is an unavoidable risk due to the spatial
separation. Imaginably, the face-to-face opportunities of
communicating with family and friends will be reduced if people
live too far. Further, every individual should shoulder the
responsibility of getting married and starting his career, it might
be hard for people to obtain the sense of happiness and enjoy a
kind of stable life if they change place of working too quickly.
【解析】
1. Nonetheless, some problems might ensue. 然而,一些问题也许跟着发生
2. the decomposition of family bonds 家庭纽带的分解
3. assume the obligation of getting married and starting his career 担负成家立业的责任
【尾段】 再次亮明观点
My stand is that young people should be inspired to expand their
minds. That is the best way for them to deepen their insight into
what they are hoping to do with their lives. Finding jobs and
exploring life in diverse cities exert many positive impacts on
many people, especially for those who dare to challenge themselves.
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