2014年4月24日雅思写作小鹏哥解析以及语料库（基本原题压中）

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2014年4月24日雅思写作题目回忆（旧题重现）

 

There are many television advertisements aimed at children. What effects of these on children?   Should TV advertisements be controlled? 儿童广告的影响，是否应该控制儿童广告？

小鹏哥4月雅思写作押题（见前博文）

 

Some people believe that advertisements should be banned since they serve no useful purpose and can even be damaging. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 广告应不应该被废除？

 

Nowadays, customers are facing increasing advertisements with the competition of different companies. To what extent do you think customers are influenced by advertisements? What measures can be taken to protect the customers?  现在广告愈来愈多，广告在多大的程度上影响了消费者，如何保护消费者？

 

 

http://www/uc/myshow/blog/misc/gif/E___6724EN00SIGG.gif 小鹏哥点评：儿童广告的影响为旧题重现；儿童广告为广告的一种；所以，该题目完全可以按照广告的不良影响展开，只是针对的对象是儿童而已。广告作为媒体类的恒热话题已经遗漏很久，一定会考察。在4月的预测中压了两道广告类话题；废除广告以及广告的影响和解决。写过该题目的考生，背诵过小鹏哥原创语料库的考生在4月24日考试中博得高分不是难事。下场4月26日雅思考生重点准备分析问题解决问题的提问；是否同意一种观点的提问。二级重点为利弊讨论和两种观点讨论：教育类；科技类；社会类为一类重点。

 

 

 

 

2014年4月24日雅思写作小鹏哥预测调整版小范围预测。明天考试的同学可以准备模板和观点句。

4月24日雅思考试结束后，小鹏哥会第一时间点评以及上传5月份的最新预测。坚持；努力；加油。

 

http://www/uc/myshow/blog/misc/gif/E___6831EN00SIGG.gif  教育类：

 

Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects. But, others believe that teenagers should focus on the subject that they are best at or that they find the most interest. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 有人认为通才教育好，有人认为应该教学生感兴趣的课程，讨论两方面？

 

Schools should only offer subjects that are beneficial to students’ future careers. Other subjects, such as music and sports, are not important. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 有人认为音乐课体育课不应该上；是否认同？

 

http://www/uc/myshow/blog/misc/gif/E___6831EN00SIGG.gif  社会类：

 

In many countries increasing proportion of young people are leaving but unable to find jobs. What problems do you think youth unemployment will bring for individual and the society? What measures should be taken to deduce level of unemployment among youngsters?  大学生择业难的影响以及解决？

 

Currently many people fail to balance the work with the other parts of lives, what are the reasons and how to solve it?  现在，人们很难平衡工作和生活的其他部分，讨论其原因再提出解决方法

 

http://www/uc/myshow/blog/misc/gif/E___6831EN00SIGG.gif  科技类：

 

Now, people can use Internet to see historic objects freely. People think we don’t need museum in the future. To what extend do u agree or disagree. 计算机是否可以代替美术馆？

 

There are social, medical, and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones. What forms do they take? Do you agree that the problems outweigh the benefits of mobile phone? 手机的使用带来了社会， 医疗和技术问题.  （手机的利大于弊）

 

http://www/uc/myshow/blog/misc/gif/E___6831EN00SIGG.gif  犯罪类：

 

Research suggests that majority of criminals who send to prison would commit crimes when set free, what do you think of this case? What can be done to solve this problem? 持续犯罪的原因以及解决途径？

 

http://www/uc/myshow/blog/misc/gif/E___6831EN00SIGG.gif  环保类：

 

Many people think it is very important to protect environment but they make no effort to do it themselves. Why does it happen? How to solve this problem? 不少人认为保护环境重要, 但是没有行动. 为什么? 如何解决?

 

http://www/uc/myshow/blog/misc/gif/E___6831EN00SIGG.gif  电视类：

 

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has destroyed communication among friends and family. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. 是否认为电视破坏了家庭和朋友间的交流：

 

 

http://www/uc/myshow/blog/misc/gif/E___6831EN00SIGG.gif 交通能源类：

 

Some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes serious pollution and uses up the world fuel resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 有人认为飞机旅行应该被限制，因为飞机旅行污染空气也消耗了世界上的油料资源，是否认同？

 

 

 

http://www/uc/myshow/blog/misc/gif/E___6724EN00SIGG.gif  小鹏哥原创语料库：（广告）

 

1.       public-service ads  = public –interest ads n公益广告

2.       fake and illegal ads 虚假的和非法的广告

3.        make-up ads 化妆品广告（例子）

4.        medicine ads 药品广告（例子）：

5.        wise consumers = wise buyers 理性的消费者（重点）：

 

6.        buy goods without consideration 冲动购物

7.        endanger the consumers’ interests v 威胁到消费者的利益（广告的弊端）：

8.        ads produced by super stars. 明星做的广告

9.        Many advertising companies produce advertisements with famous and popular actors or singers 很多的广告公司会雇佣歌手以及明星代言商品；

10.    exert a subtle influence on 对于……有微妙的影响

 

11.      …… are affected by = are influenced by ……  被 …… 影响

12.    poorly educated children in the remote rural areas 偏远农村地区的文盲儿童：

拓展：in the remote rural areas在偏远的地区：

13.    Nevertheless, on no account can we ignore the negative influence triggered by …… 任何情况下不能忽视……引起的不良影响

14.    irrational buyers = unwise buyers n非理性的消费者：

15.    imposes much pressure upon consumers economically v增加消费者的经济负担：

 

16.    …… are full of flowery phrases and empty promises 充满了花哨的宣传语以及空洞的承诺：（写作广告的弊端）：

17.    censorship of ads 广告审查

拓展：censor v 审查……：

18.    ……really arouse the public concern for those poorly educated children in the remote rural areas. 唤醒了公众对于哪些偏远地区失学儿童的关注：

19.    Many unwise buyers will buy the goods their favorite stars represent 许多的非理性的消费者会购买他们喜欢的明星代言的商品；

20.    foster rational consumption habits and collect some information of other consumers before buying a product. 培养理性的消费习惯以及在买商品前收集一些信息；

 

 

 

http://www/uc/myshow/blog/misc/gif/E___6724EN00SIGG.gif  小鹏哥原创儿童广告的弊端段落分享：

 

Indeed, some TV commercials   are the underlying reasons of children’s unhealthy diet. More precisely, after watching a rich variety of vivid food ads on fast-foods, fried foods and carbonated beverage, unwise consumers， especially for those children， will unavoidably be swayed by the flowery phrase of the advertisers’ publicity and thus purchase the foods they made propaganda for. Imaginably, too much intake of cheese, ice cream, salty snacks is physically detrimental. To illustrate, obesity or over-nutrition are now agonizing millions of families. To some extent, the alluring package, eye-catching pictures, flashy words of various fast foods do exert a subtle influence on the psychology of those who are in the formative years and trigger  unhealthy condition.

 

http://www/uc/myshow/blog/misc/gif/E___6724EN00SIGG.gif  小鹏哥翻译:   的确，一些电视广告是孩子们不健康饮食的潜在根源，具体而言，看过很多快餐，油炸食品和碳酸饮料的广告，很多非理性消费者，尤其是儿童会不可避免地受到广告宣传花哨的宣传语的影响，因此购买他们宣传的商品。可以可以想象，太多的奶酪，冰淇淋，含盐量高的食品的摄入有害健康。例如，少年肥胖和营养过剩给很多家庭带来痛苦，各种快餐食品的诱人包装，惹眼图片以及花哨的宣传对于成长中的年轻人的心理施加了不良影响，因此，导致了不健康的状况。

 

http://www/uc/myshow/blog/misc/gif/E___6831EN00SIGG.gif   小鹏哥亮点词汇：

 

1.        TV commercials 电视广告（用词精准个性）

2.        will unavoidably be swayed by…… 被影响（词汇升级）

 

3.        made propaganda for. 做宣传（用词精准；该短语尤其表达不良宣传）

4.        too much intake of ……太多的摄入量 （intake 用在语境中恰到好处）

 

5.        is physically detrimental. 有害身体健康

6.        do exert a subtle influence on  施加了微妙影响（广告话题一定可用）

7.        those who are in the formative years 哪些成长中的人：

 

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