2013年4月27日雅思写作小鹏哥原创范文：专才和通才

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http://www/uc/myshow/blog/misc/gif/E___6724EN00SIGG.gif 小鹏哥发言：4月27日考察的题目为旧题改写，即是比较专才教育和通才教育哪个更加可取？范文就在我原创的雅思强化写作教材的81页，这对长春雅思学员是利好消息，阅读过我的文章的学生无论在思路拓展和遣词造句方面都有优势，雅思写作的考试周报点评有助于我们学习固定优秀的精彩表达。雅思写作博取高分的关键因素就是多练习，熟能生巧，练习多了才能得心应手。平时要多读范文，多积累好词好句，把这些积累都应用在自己的写作之中。

http://www/uc/myshow/blog/misc/gif/E___6778EN00SIGG.gif2013年4月27日考试题目：

Some people think older schoolchildren should study a large number of subjects in a wide range of knowledge. Others believe schoolchildren should study a smaller number of subjects in a greater detail. Discuss both views and give your own opinion 有人认为学生应该学习广泛的课程，有人认为学生应该详细地学习少量的课程，讨论再结论？

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In some countries, schools aim to provide a general education across a range of subjects. In some other countries, children focus on a narrow range of subjects related to a particular career. For today’s world, which system do you think is more appropriate? 专才教育和通才教育？

http://www/uc/myshow/blog/misc/gif/E___6743EN00SIGG.gif雅思小鹏哥原创范文赏析：（薛鹏）：（见小鹏哥原创范文集强化写作P81)

首段：背景介绍+争议焦点+作家立场

Never has the topic concerning the pattern of education failed to arouse people’s attention. People hold divergent views about which one is more preferable, specialized education or comprehensive education. Someone argue that the specialists in different fields are what the current education system needs to foster. Yet, still others believe that it is necessary to implement the general education to enhance the all-round abilities of students. As I see it, it is of immense value for students to receive the comprehensive education.

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receive the comprehensive education. 接受综合全面的教育

二段：专才的利好；

No doubt, people who support the idea of specialized education do have reasons to some extent. For one thing, it is extremely efficient for the learners to acquire knowledge when applying themselves to only one subject. For another, it exerts a beneficial impact on the future job-hunting, for the specialists can definitely meet the demand of some enterprises such as the training of athletes, cooks and other professionals.

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exerts a beneficial impact on  v 施加利好的影响

三段：通才的利好；

I have to admit that there is an element of truth in the argument above. However, on no account could we ignore the profound influence of the general education. First, traveling in the ocean of divergent subjects could help enlarge ones’ knowledge scope and broaden one’s mental horizons. Hence, it can deepen one’s insight into life and foster one’s rational thinking, analytical thinking and critical thinking. Still, by means of all-round learning, it can add spice and enrichment to students’ dull routine of daily life. It is conceivable that one can cultivate various hobbies and talents as a generalist. Last of all, knowledge is no burden. Acquiring a wide range of subjects could enable one to realize overall development and thus better prepare him or her for the future career challenges. Maybe it fails to enhance ones’ competitiveness after graduation, but the moral education and character-training it covers could be beneficial to ones’ growth in the long run.

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knowledge is no burden  艺多不压身；

acquiring a wide range of subjects 学习广泛的课程；

enlarge ones’ knowledge scope and broaden one’s mental horizons 拓宽知识面以及开拓视野；

尾段：支持通才；

In a word, it is fairly difficult to say that the special education is the better way to train the youngsters. My view is that everyone could benefit a great deal from the general learning, both psychologically and intellectually （344）

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