2012年12月1日雅思写作小鹏哥原创范文：远程办公的利弊

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More and more companies are allowing employees to work at home. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? 公司容许职员在家里办公，你认为好还是不好？（12月1日考试题目：旧题重现）

 

 

http://www/uc/myshow/blog/misc/gif/E___6724EN00SIGG.gif 布局图：

 

* 全文布局：（利弊讨论类话题）

 

首段：①背景介绍（句型引导）+ ②争议焦点（句型引导）+ ③写作目的 （直接表达利大于弊；弊大于利）

 

二段：利好的展开（二——三点）必须要有细节的支持：

 

三段：弊端的展开（二——三点）必须要有细节的支持：

 

尾段：再次强调自己的观点（适合首段亮出了自己观点）：

 

* 雅思写作小鹏哥背诵语料库：

 

1.        telecommuting远程办公

2.        working at home  远程办公

3.        tele-working 远程办公

4.        working from home 远程办公

5.        working as telecommuters 作为远程办公者

 

6.        choose a more flexible way of work 灵活的工作方式

7.        Tele-commuting could enhance the efficiency of working, for it effectively surmounts the geographical barrier and enhances the flexibility of work.  远程办公提高工作效率，因为他有效地克服了地理的障碍，提高了工作的灵活性。

8.       exert a baneful impact on 施加了不良的影响

9.       is physically detrimental 有害身体健康

10.    become socially inadequate 社交方面力不从心

 

11.    Telecommuting is most likely to generate absenteeism and slack in working远程办公可能会导致怠工和工作上的懒散

12.    The constraints in offices and peer pressure can motivate the employees to work harder办公室的限制和来自同事的压力能刺激员工更加努力地工作

13.    On the part of employees, they no longer take the trouble to commute between their homes and offices every day. 对于员工来说，他们不再用费力地每天在家和办公室之间往返了

14.    Such flexible way of working has been defined as a totally new way of living brought about by the rapid development of technology；这种灵活的工作方式被诠释成一种由迅速发展的科技带来的全新的生活方式

 

http://www/uc/myshow/blog/misc/gif/E___6724EN00SIGG.gif 小鹏哥范文打造：（新东方薛鹏）

 

首段：背景介绍+争议焦点+作家立场

 

The contrivance of the Internet has profoundly revolutionized people’s mode of working. Modern people enjoy more flexibility in opting for their desirable working style. People have been pondering for years the pros of cons of telecommuting without reaching any definite consensus. Personally speaking, the demerits of working at home prevail over its possible merits.

 

http://www/uc/myshow/blog/misc/gif/E___6724EN00SIGG.gif 翻译：互联网的发明深刻地改变了人们的工作方式，现代人在选择自己喜欢的工作方式方面有了更多的灵活性，人们一直在争议远程办公的利弊，没有达成一致观点。我认为远程办公弊大于弊。

 

亮点：has profoundly revolutionized 深刻地改变：

 

二段：利好的展开：

 

I have to concede that working from home is never without its unique virtues. One possible advantage is that on the part of employees, they no longer take the trouble to commute between their homes and offices every day. Therefore, more precious time could be economized to embark on other worthwhile things such as self-improvement or entertainment. Another merit deriving from telecommuting is that tele-commuting could enhance the efficiency of working, for workers can arrange their jobs flexibly and thus boost their efficiency accordingly. A case in point is that numerous freelance writers like to telecommute for the newspaper office rather than being employed as full time editor.

 

http://www/uc/myshow/blog/misc/gif/E___6724EN00SIGG.gif 翻译：我承认，远程办公不是没有其独有的利好，第一个优势在于，对于员工来说，他们不必往返，因此，宝贵的时间可以节省下来用于自我提高或者娱乐。另外一个利好在在于工作效率的提高，因为职员可以灵活安排自己的工作，进而喜欢自己的工作，相应地提高工作效率。一个例子就是很多自由作家喜欢为报馆远程办公而不是做全职编辑

 

亮点：embark on other worthwhile things 从事其他有意义的事情

 

 

三段：

 

Although telecommuting is embraced by numerous people, I still remain suspicious of it. Virtually, under no circumstances can we brush aside the underlying downsides triggered by it. First, telecommuting is most likely to generate absenteeism and slack in working. More precisely, millions of telecommuters tend to slacken their efforts or lose working passion when telecommute for a long time. By contrast, the constraints in offices and peer pressure can motivate the employees to work harder. Further, those telecommuters are more likely to become socially inadequate and even generate an eccentric character because the lack of co-workers will make it challenging for them to get along with others. 

 

http://www/uc/myshow/blog/misc/gif/E___6724EN00SIGG.gif  翻译：尽管很多人支持远程办公，我对于其优点表示怀疑。实际上，远程办公的弊端不应该被忽视。第一，远程办公可能会导致怠工和工作上的懒散。 换言之，很多职员当过久地远程办公时就会放松努力或者失去工作热情。相反，办公室的限制和来自同事的压力能刺激员工更加努力地工作。另外，远程办公会使人变得社交方面力不从心，形成古怪的性格，因为没有同事使人很难和他人交往。

 

亮点：become socially inadequate 变得社交方面力不从心

 

尾段：

 

Overall, it is my standpoint that telecommuting is a two-edged weapon which can be used equally for good or evil. Such flexible way of working has been defined as a totally new way of living brought about by the rapid development of technology. Although telecommuting enjoys its unique advantages, working in the office is more suitable for the vast majority of people and could benefit the employers in the long term.（全文340）

 

http://www/uc/myshow/blog/misc/gif/E___6724EN00SIGG.gif 翻译：我的立场是远程办公是一般双刃刀，有其利弊。这种灵活的工作方式被诠释成一种由迅速发展的科技带来的全新的生活方式。尽管远程办公有其优势，办公室办公更加适合大多数人，也可以使得老板从长远受益。

 

亮点：is a two-edged weapon which can be used equally for good or evil. 是一般双刃刀可以为利可以为害

 

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