2012年10月13日雅思写作小鹏哥原创范文之多元文化社会的利弊

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2012年10月13日雅思考试作文：（旧题重现）

 

We have a mixture of people from different culture and ethnic groups in a country. is this a positive or negative development? 多元文化社会的利弊（利弊讨论）

 

题库题目：

Multi-cultural societies in which there is a mixture of different ethnic peoples. Bring more benefits than drawbacks to a country? To you agree or disagree (2006. 8. 25)

 

http://www/uc/myshow/blog/misc/gif/E___6724EN00SIGG.gif 小鹏哥布局图：

 

首段：背景介绍+争议焦点+作家立场（讨论利弊得出答案）

 

二段：两个利好的展开以及细节支持

 

三段：两个弊端的展开以及细节支持

 

尾段：亮明观点+总结理由；

 

 

 

例子：美国的熔炉社会：

 

http://www/uc/myshow/blog/misc/gif/E___6724EN00SIGG.gif 利好：各种民族（不同文化背景，生活习俗）组建多元社会的利好：（1）各种民族互补，互相学习，共同进步；消除固有的成见和误解；（2）人们的心态包容， 追求自由和懂得尊敬；

 

http://www/uc/myshow/blog/misc/gif/E___6724EN00SIGG.gif  弊端：（1）文化侵略； 少数民族的语言，文化传统，可能在和强势民族的融合的过程中被同化掉。 文化的多元性对于人类文明来说如同花香对于花朵。（2）难免有种族歧视以及种族隔离；体现在社会资源分配不公平，例如，社会福利，工作机会，婚姻。

 

 

http://www/uc/myshow/blog/misc/gif/E___6724EN00SIGG.gif 雅思写作小鹏哥背诵语料库：

 

1.        We will no longer be able to enjoy the diversity and depth provided by a more balanced cultural development. 我们不能享受平衡文化发展带来的文化的多元性以及深度；

2.        cultural imperialism 文化帝国主义；文化侵略 

3.        it is better to create a mixed society  创建多元社会

4.        multi-cultural societies in which there is a mixture of different ethnic peoples 有不同民族融合的多元社会；

5.        it ignites racial conflicts 导致种族矛盾

 

6.        promote mutual understanding and multiply friendship 促进理解以及增进了友谊（国家举办体育比赛）

7.        multi-cultural society 多元文化社会

8.        is beneficial to mutual understanding and learning 有助于互相了解和学习

9.        to form a multi-cultural society 形成多元文化社会

10.    eliminate / eradicate  deep-rooted bias / prejudice 消除固有的成见

 

11.    establish a mixed society which is made up of various nationalities 建立多民族的混合社会

12.    living in the same place and experiencing the same lifestyle make peoples remit others aggressive behavior 使得一些民族宽容了其他民族的过激的行为；

13.    with various kinds of cultures, people may and will enjoy the mixed culture consisting of peoples from all kinds of traditions. 享受到不同民族组成的文化；

14.    the Big Apple is a melting pot of all cultures  （美国）纽约城是各种文化的熔炉社会

15.    When living in the same community, it is recommended to eliminate discrimination amongst peoples 消除民族歧视是被推荐；（作家观点）

 

16.    only in this way can people enjoy high levels of civilization from all peoples 只有这样，享受到各种民族带来的文明；

17.    it is better to maintain a multi-cultural society with multi-racial communities 保持由多元文化群体组成的社会 （作家观点）

18.    have a kind comprehensive state of mind 有包容的心态

19.    be alert to 警惕 ……

 

 

http://www/uc/myshow/blog/misc/gif/E___6724EN00SIGG.gif小鹏哥原创范文： （新东方薛鹏）

 

首段：背景介绍（个性开篇）+争议焦点+写作目的

 

The past several decades have witness great changes in a population structure of a nation. It is not rare to see multi-cultural societies in which there is a mixture of different ethnic peoples. People have been debating the pros and cons of a society that is composed of diverse peoples with different cultural background without reaching any definite agreement. This essay aims to explore the merits and demerits of a multi-cultural community and then present my view.

 

二段：利好的展开：（1）各种民族互补，学习，进步；（2）人们的心态包容

 

To be sure, a great many merits could be gained when a country is made up of a rich variety of peoples. The most eye-catching virtue is that co-existence could promote the mutual understanding and friendship among peoples from manifold ethnic groups.  It is conceivable that mutual assistance might eliminate some deep-rooted prejudice when peoples with diverse cultures live together.   Meanwhile, people will have golden chances to have a deeper insight into different culture and custom. Mutual admiration and longtime study could make all the peoples learn the virtue of each other and thus become prosperous together. Another advantageous aspect deriving from mixed society is that those who live in or grow up in the multi-racial society will more likely to respect others and pursue freedom because they usually have a kind comprehensive state of mind.

 

三段：弊端的展开：（1）文化侵略；（2）种族歧视；

 

Notwithstanding all that, there are some drawbacks that a multi-cultural and multi-racial community might trigger.  First, under no circumstances can we ignore the adverse impacts brought about by cultural imperialism. More precisely, contacting with and assimilation of dominant culture will diminish the trait and uniqueness of some lesser-known culture and make the world less colorful and wonderful than before. Another possible drawback might be the racial discrimination and racial segregation. To illustrate, in some western countries, African Americans are, in most cases, suffering various injustice and inequality in terms of job market, social welfare, marriage, or even taking advantage of public facilities.

 

 

尾段：亮明观点 + 总结理由

 

In closing, my view is that a multi-cultural community is a two-edged weapon which can be used equally for good or evil. It is better to maintain a multi-cultural society with multi-racial communities. However, what is of the utmost importance is to be alert to the possible cultural imperialism and racial injustice. （357）

 

 

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