2011年3月5日雅思写作小鹏哥解析

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2011年3月5日雅思写作题目:
Some people believe governments should spend money on saving languages of few speakers from dying out completely. Others think this is a waste of financial resources. Discuss both views and give your position?有人认为政府应该花钱拯救哪些濒临消亡的少数民族语言;有人认为这是财政资源的浪费,请讨论两种观点,提出你的意见?
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雅思写作小鹏哥(薛鹏):吉林大学外国语言语言学以及应用语言学硕士,长春新东方国外考试部写作教师。十年授课经历,主将各类写作课程以及词汇课程。
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支持的意见:
①实际上,任由少数民族语言消亡是对人类文明的践踏,是对少数民族使用语言权利的公然侵犯:In fact, allowing the minority language to go with the wind is an abuse of human civilization and an obvious violation of the basic right of language of the lesser known groups.
②悠久的传统和文化的精髓能够通过保护保护少数民族语言得以体现:By means of protecting the languages of few speakers, the long tradition and cultural heritage can be maintained in modern time.
③大多数语言学家认为语言的消亡现象对传承文化遗产造成了很大的伤害:
The vast majority of
④语言文化的多元性对于人类文明如同空气对于地球: The language diversity is to human civilization what air is to the earth.
⑤如果国家对于保护少数民族语言有专项的经济援助,语言学研究者就可以努力对正在消亡的语言做大量的记录和研究保护的方式:Linguistic researchers are making efforts to keep bulk of documentations for the disappearing languages.
①由于极度耗时耗能,国家投资保护少数民族语言在很多人看来是一种金钱和其他资源的浪费:
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国家的经济预算有限,而有待解决的社会问题又是无穷的,日益上涨的民生需求和保护语言文化的经济投入是矛盾的。Due
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背景①:很多最近的社会研究表明,语言的消亡在很多的国家都是一个显著的现象:A number of recent social studies indicate that language disappearance is an obvious phenomenon.
背景②:随着现代文化的发展,一些古老的语言和少数民族的语言已经不再是种族和文化身份的象征. With the prosperity of modern culture, some ancient languages and languages of minority groups are no longer symbols of ethnic and cultural identity.
争论焦点③:Recently, a heated debate springs up as to
whether it is the duty of the government to
allocate
我的观点句: 公众还没有意识到那些古老的语言和少数民族语言在现代的意义,在这一方面公众的反应比较迟钝: The public has been slow to realize the significance of those ancient languages and languages of ethic groups in the modern age.
首段的写法:个性开篇 + 争议焦点 +写作目的
背景①:很多最近的社会研究表明,语言的消亡在很多的国家都是一个显著的现象:A number of recent social studies indicate that language disappearance is an obvious phenomenon.
背景②:随着现代文化的发展,一些古老的语言和少数民族的语言已经不再是种族和文化身份的象征. With the prosperity of modern culture, some ancient languages and languages of minority groups are no longer symbols of ethnic and cultural identity.
争论焦点③:Recently, a
heated debate springs up as to whether it is the duty of the
government to allocate
我的观点句:公众还没有意识到那些古老的语言和少数民族语言在现代的意义,在这一方面公众的反应比较迟钝: The public has been slow to realize the significance of those ancient languages and languages of ethic groups in the modern age.