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写 作 训 练（一）

高分作文的几大要点：1. 要点全      2．词组优先原则     3. 丰富的语法结构（从句，非谓语，倒装，强调句式,with复合结构等）   4. 恰当使用过渡词或过渡句

词组(高级词组)优先原则：know—be aware of        like—               

 should do---              suddenly--             use--    

replace----               need---                visit ---                          

influence---              be happy---            be healthy--- 

think of---                         be important-- 

thank sb for sth---                spend time in doing---   

be good at---                      be busy with---

in my opinion---                   try one’s best to do sth--

… …                     

高考英语作文写作之常用万能句型

As is known to us, …   There is no doubt that……/It goes without saying that……

It is universally acknowledged that……/It is generally agreed that……            

The reason why ……is that ……          That’s why/That’s because……

It is high time that sb did sth           As far as I’m concerned, …

……be of vital importance        As far as we know,…….

作文训练一篇：某中学生英语报社正开展一场题为“Young teachers or elderly teachers，which do you prefer?”

请你依据下面表格所提供的要点写一篇短文，向该报社投稿。注意：1．词数100左右，开头语已为你写好，不计入总数；2．短文必须包含表格的全部内容。要求观点明确，结构合理，紧凑连贯3、参考词汇：energetic, adj. 有活力的 enthusiastic, adj.热情的 create, vt. 创造

根据下文完成作文，划线部分尝试用高级词组和句式翻译

在这个问题上意见有分歧。Opinions are divided on this question.（开头已给出）

一些学生可能喜欢老年教师教学。那是因为他们认为老年教师教学经验丰富。知识对学

生来讲至关重要。众所周知，老年教师往往更耐心，会细心的解释。然而，有些人就是

喜欢青年教师。毫无疑问，青年教师精力充沛，热情。通常他们可以使他们的课生动有

趣。此外，他们更愿意接受或创造新的想法，使得他们可以创造性和有效地教学。

就我而言，我老教师和年轻教师都喜欢，因为从他们身上我们都能学到很多东西。

One possible version:

Opinions are divided on this question.  Some students may like elderly teachers'  teaching. That’s because they think elderly teachers are more experienced in teaching. It is knowledge that really counts for students. As is known to us, elderly teachers tend to be patient and careful with explanations. However, some prefer to be taught by young teachers. There is no doubt that young teachers are more energetic and enthusiastic. Usually they can make their classes lively and interesting. Besides, they are more ready to accept or create new ideas, making them teach creatively and effectively.

      As far as I’m concerned, I like both the elderly teachers and the young ones, because from them we both can learn a lot.

请注意划线部分的使用，对上下文的衔接和紧凑所起的作用。