不同类型作文的写法——1

I.图画类作文

看图作文在高考书面表达中占有相当大的比重。这类试题的特点是：形象、直观、内容具体，且在图画的前面一般还有文字说明，因此考生一般都有话可说且不会走题。但写作要注意一下几点：

▲仔细阅读图画及文字说明，首先确定文章体裁。这类文章一般以记叙文或说明文为主，有时还有点评类的文章。

▲记叙文：要抓住记叙文的六要素：when、where、who、what、why、how. 即五个 “W”和一个 “H”。这就要注意人物与空间的关系、画面与画面的关系、要点与发挥的关系。

▲常见句型有：

1． One day, while he was…, he…

2． Once upon a time there was a/an …who…every day.

3． It was snowing/raining heavily on Monday/Sunday morning……

4． LiMing was at…, waiting for..

5． Although he is …, he believes he will grow up to be….

6． Remember: “No pains, no gains.”

7． This story tells us…

8． From the picture we can see…

9． While you are here, we’ll provide you with…

10. It is really an unforgettable day…

 

(I)记叙文

Example 1

下面四幅图描述的是李大爷在某市场的一次经历。请你根据图画所提供的信息，描述事情发生的经过。

 

注意：

1．短文必须包括所有图片的主要内容，可适当增加细节，以使短文连贯、完整。

2．词数：100左右

3．参考词汇：清仓甩卖a clearance sale

             货摊stall; 摊贩stall keeper

Sample writing:

     One day, Uncle Li was walking through a market when he heard somebody shouting,” “ A clearance sale!” Uncle Li looked around and found a stall not far away. There was a sign saying “Goods on sale”. Two men were shouting at the top of their voice. He hurried to the stall and bought some good goods there, Without noticing how happy the two men were. When he arrived home, he showed the goods to Aunt Li. Aunt Li opened the boxes and her face immediately turned red with anger. “These are all fake goods.!” She shouted angrily. Hearing these words, Uncle Li took the goods and hurried back to the stall, but the two stall keepers had already run away. “They fooled me!” Uncle Li thought to himself sadly.

 

(II) 说明文

一般先要仔细看图，把画面联系起来，弄清图画的目的、意图；然后进行概括，找出一个说明对象，接着从时间、过程、步骤等方面加以解释、说明；最后进行总结，得出结论。对事物进行说明时，一定要做到条理清楚，明了易懂。

Example2:

    假如你是李华，请根据下列图示，给你的加拿大朋友Mickey写一封信，叙述暑假你和家人游览国家公园湖心岛的经历。

 

注意：1.按照图中给出的顺序描述可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

2．开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。

1．词数：100左右。

2．参考词汇：纪念品souvenir; 渡船ferryboat; 缆车cable car

Dear Michy,

How did you spend your summer vacation this year?

……

I’m looking forward to your reply!

                                                                                     Yours,

                                                                                     LiHua

我们可以看出这篇文章是说明文，说明的对象是我和家人游览湖心岛的路线及经历；应用第一人称来写；时态应以一般过去时态为主。

Sample writing:

Dear Micky,

      How did you spend your summer vacation this year?

      In my vacation, my family and I went to National Park. We visited the island in the center of the lake.

      We took a ferryboat to the island at 9:00 am. The first place we visited was the Botanical Garden. Then we visited the Site of an Old Temple which had a history of over 600 years. Lunch was served at11:30. After that, we went shopping for some souvenirs at the Gift Shop before we left. Finally, we returned from the island by cable car at 3:30 pm.

      Though we were tired, we had a good time, because we like nature very much. Do you like nature, too?

      I’m looking forward to your reply!

                                                                                      Yours,

                                                                                      LiHua

 

(III)点评式作文

写作点拨：

1．仔细读图，对图画进行简要的描述。

2．透过现象看本质。要对图画所反应现象的本质正确把握，形成自己独特的观点。

3．用事实说话，避免空洞的说教，通过摆事实、讲道理来阐明自己的主张。例如：上海2004年春季高考作文“松松绑”，四川中江县高中的看图作文，妈妈阻止儿子去扶摔倒的女孩，后来儿子对倒了的油瓶也置之不理。 

Example3:现在请看下边这则漫画，先对漫画的进行描述，然后在谈谈自己的看法

用事实说话，避免空洞的说教，通过摆事实、讲道理来阐明自己的主张。例如：上海2004年春季高考作文“松松绑”，四川中江县高中的看图作文，妈妈阻止儿子去扶摔倒的女孩，后来儿子对倒了的油瓶也置之不理。                               

Sample writing:

      A man in the picture seems to throw some rubbish into the dustbin, but he doesn’t approach it, resulting in the waste lying here and there, which makes people feel dirty and uncomfortable. This is because he doesn’t want to take any trouble throwing it into the dustbin although it was within his reach. However, what they did violate public morally. If everyone behave in this way, the world will be a big rubbish dump with files round and people will live in a world of diseases. Besides, dustmen will have a very hard job to clean the world we live in.

 

不同类型作文的写法——2

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不同类型作文的写法——3

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不同类型作文的写法——4

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不同类型作文的写法——5

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