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The most important influence on young adults

(2017-01-14 09:37:12)
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Some people think that the family is the most important influence on young adults. Other people think that friends are the most important influence on young adults. Which view do you agree with? Use examples to support your position. Your writing should exceed 200 words. 

Young adults are playing a significant role in modern society. Hence, it is essential that we indentify the cause of youngsters’ behavior in order to make younglings behave in a more proper way. This essay blow will focus on why friends generate even more profound effect than the family on young citizen. 

Although many city dwellers believe that by observing their parents behavior the youngsters learn how to cope with all kinds of situations at the first, as young adults are rarely in full accordance with the parents thinking, they tend to refuse to learn from their family members. 

Three main factors, from my point of view, contribute to the facts that the company younglings keep affects remarkably their behavior. To begin with, compared with the family, friends enjoy even closer relationship with youngsters. Many examples have proved that young adults usually share secrets with their bosom friends instead of their parents. Moreover, while the youth exchange their feelings with their family members by discussing their difficulties, they share activities with their friends. In another word, the youth are more likely to be influenced when they participate in the activities. For instance, the young adult who told the importance of cooperation by his father may not understand it until he is involved in a football game. Ultimately, the young citizens may face the similar problem their friends have, they can learn from the successful experience their friends have. That is to say their friends could set an example for them. The most famous example is that once one of the classmates works hard and win a reward, the others become hard-working. 

In brief, the family does exert a profound effect on the young adults. However, friends always play a even more vital role in youngsters’ lives. Therefore, I am convinced that friends are the most important influence on younglings.

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