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It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to
a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to
the Wild West.
We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in
the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late
afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad’s friend, picked us up from the
airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.
His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and
we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night
in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water
rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle
Paul woke us up to have breakfast. "The day starts at dawn on my
farm," he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the
chickens. while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out
to graze(吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding
horses. They looked really cool.
In the afternoon, I asked
Uncle Paul if I could take a hose ride, and he said yes, as long as
my dad went with me. I wasn’t going to take a horse ride by myself
anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our
horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. "Don’t be late for
supper," Uncle Paul cried, "and keep to the track so that you don’t
get lost!" "OK! " my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and
his fam house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and
the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the
late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a
beautiful woven(编织的)blanket spread out upon the ground just for
us.
Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of
my horse.
注意:
(1)所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
(2)至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语:
(3)续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
(4)续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1: Suddenly a little
rabbit jumped out in front of my
horse.
Paragraph 2: We had no idea where
we were and it was getting dark
【满分范文】
Paragraph 1
Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of
my horse. Instinctively, I yelled out loud, pulling back the reins
hard in order to stop the horse from hurting the little creature.
Badly startled by the sudden incident, the horse sped off the track
into another direction. Dad followed closely behind, calling out to
tell me how to soothe the terrified horse and I did as told.
Finally, the horse calmed down, but we seemed to get lost, unable
to go back to the mountain
road.
Paragraph 2
We had no idea where we were and it was getting
dark. Wandering around, we were still stuck in the dilemma. Much to
our delight, the sound of water in the distance caught our
attention and drove us to the riverbank. Dad proposed that we
should walk along the river which may lead us to the farm house and
nothing seemed better than that. Time appeared to be merrier and
shorter when I stayed together with Dad and before long, the farm
house came into sight. What a thrilling but memorable experience it
was!
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