澳德学员写作中常出现的错误分类

• 标点符号

澳德学员喜欢用中文的顿号，代替英语的逗号。此外，标点符号失误，造成不能理解。

请认真阅读牛津词典上关于标点符号的用法。

• 主动与被动关系

1. There are two drawings above. The first one is described (describes) that a flower is growing well in the warming room, when it is raining.
2. But the second is depicted (depicts) that the same flower is broken/die (dying) without the warming-room.
3. This fair(误：应该为hair)  style has been spent his (cost him) 300 yuan.
4. This picture implies that this state is changed (changing) gradually

• 名词性从句的语序

1.  what is the pictures conveys (the picture conveys is) a common social phenomenon.

• 动词双宾语失误

1. The parents give everything to the children what they want (their children want).

• 句子中出现多个缺乏关联的限定性谓语动词

1.  We should be study (study) good aspect of the pop stars.

•   固定搭配

1. The parents who are taking care of their children take more attentions (pay more attention), which are not good at (for) their growing.
2.  For (in) the long run, when the children are facing…
3. So they didn’t have the ability of dealing (to deal) with the problems themselves.
4. I want (want to)have some information about Project Hope.
5. I am interest (interested) in it.
6. I want to go (go to) your party
7. I cant’ participate (participate in) your birthday party.
8.  We can see that his action is unacceptable by (to) the people
9.  The third reason is that now many students finish many (much) homework.

•   词性

1.  It demonstrates the flower in the warming-room isn’t facing with the difficults (difficulties).
2.  Obviously, two men are football fan who are crazying (crazy).
3. It is a pleasure (pleasant) thing for pupil.
4. I am very apologized (sorry).
5.  their burden are so weight (heavy)
6. parents limit their chidren’s interesting (interests).
7. teacher should reduce stuent’s burden and raise their interesting (interests).
8. I’m very pleasure (pleased) but I can’t attend this party.

•   语言能力欠缺

1.  温室 warming-room ( a greenhouse)
2. The same flower is broken ( withering) without the warming-room.
3. many student born going to school and aren’t like studing.
4. Almost all the students received education since their childhood and did not like studying.
5. I will not to (去掉) come.
6. with more and more contentions facing to us to challenge, holding more knowledges is a way reached success.
7. With more and more contentions for us to challenge, we should acquire more knowledge to ensure success.
8. you isn’t (invited) me to your birthday party.

•  一致与平行

1.         主谓一致

2.         平行结构

1.  When the children are facing the difficult or have (being) in trouble, they will ask their parents (for help).

3.         名词和代词在数上的一致

 Obviously two mean (teams) are football fan who are crazying.

4.         注意单复数

 we should take some positive measure (measures).

They will become excellent person (people) in future.

• 汉英对应

1.  The parents should exceices (educate/train) their children who is solved problem indepented.
2. How (so) many people admire this persons who have intellectual.
3. Throughout a country children arrive at school (receive education) at approximately the same time.
4. The recent wheather is very cold lending to have a cold with me (leaving me with a cold).
5. This absence for reason (the reason for absence)
6. consider it as 60 is okey (60 marks as ok).
7. This phenomenon exists (places) potential hazard on our society.

•  拼写错误

1. Expecially (especially)
2. Tipical (Typical)
3. I am looking forward to your replay (reply).
4. serve supper at 6:00 so at (as) to have a nice long evening to talk.
5. A young idler, an old begger(beggar)
6. I cant’ (can’t) participate your birthday party.
7. his scort (score) is 60 in Chinese text
8. parents limit their chidren’s (children’s) interesting.
9. teacher should reduce stuent’s (student’s) burden and raise their interesting.
10. I think that’s a nice patty (party) for you.
11. I am writing this letter to expres (express) my sincere thanks
12. I play football with my coullages (colleagues)
13. This cartoon vividly inlustrats (illustrates)
14. facing this score, this child doesn’t fell (feel) restment

•  An+名词

This cartoon illustrates the dark sides of society. From it we can see that a (an) old father was folded as a football by his three sons and a daughter who show less concern for their own father.

•  连词与介词失误

1.  Just as （because）person has difference concept of value and philosophy the result this phenomenon.
2.  I think that’s a nice patty for you. A lot of friends, foods, wines and cakes. Thus (however), I must tell you a bad news.
3.  Because I have designed to have a travel with my parents at (on) that day.
4.  Many of (去掉) students reckoned the marks are not important,
5.  among (during) this month,
6.   So that I have to lay (lie in) bed two months.
7.  I hope to invite you to attend my birthday party at (on) September 30^th.

•  祈使句

 Please to (去掉) help me achieve my wish.

• 句子中出现多个主谓结构，缺少主句与从句的关系或者缺少必要的标点符号。

1. We need learn their persistence and never give up that (, which ) is the way to success.
2. Chidren study so long that (and) can’t play a game everyday.
3. (That) every mark are passed 60 is enough.
4. (That) 60 represents a line is only qualifing your courses

•  时态

I’m glad you don’t (did not) forget me.

• 对情态动词了解不够

1. we should to (educate a student according to his natural ability.
2. For I can’t attending (attend) this party.

• 冠词的错用

1.  a popular saying in the (去掉) china.
2.  They are a (去掉) children.

•  对什么才可以作主语的规则不清楚

 get (getting) through is emperor.

•  缺少应有介词

  I am inviting some friends for dinner (on) Saturday night.

•  缺少形容词性物主代词

 and (his) right hand throws away his Chinese book

• 句中出现不应有的标点

Only in these ways, (去掉)can students raise confidence and like studing.

• 介词后添加句子的形式错误

with he (his) handing a chinese paper with sixty scores.

• 凭空臆造单词

 while he is running fastly (fast).

we have kepted (kept) communication with letter form.

In faction (fact0

We should study hardly (hard) to expect higher than 60.

  facing this score, this child doesn’t fell restment (depressed)

childrens (children)

•  句子不止一个，却只有一个主语。

 Adolescents are addicted to net bars, have (which has) three main reasons.

•  谓语使用不当

 The picture vividly shown (has vividly shown),

•  选词不当

The cartoon mirrors a phenomenon of students’ bad habit, includes (including) the guys graduating (studying) in universities.

 parents and teachers both didn’t (neither parents nor teachers) continu to conection.

Give a talk (speech) on “how to protect our environment?”.

• 对于是介词还是不定式符号分不清楚

 I look forward to hear (hearing) from you.

 We should attach importance to promote (promoting) the traditional virtue.

 

句子改错练习：

1．指代方面

1）Sometimes teachers will inform students of the heavy burden they have to bear.

改为:Sometimes teachers will inform students of the heavy burden the students have to bear.

2）People have been fighting against the influence of TV commercials, but it often proves useless.

改为:People have been fighting against the influence of TV commercials, which often proves useless.

3) Television provides us with a vivid, colorful world, which enables us to enjoy life thoroughly.

改为:Television, which enables us to enjoy life thoroughly,provides us with a vivid, colorful world.

2．修饰方面

1）To keep the air clean, we must move the factories which give off poisonous gases to the countryside.

改为:To keep the air clean, we must move the factories which give off poisonous gases, to the countryside.

2）Without television, people can't get information which comes from other parts of the world immediately.

改为:Without television, people can't immediately get information which comes from other parts of the world.

3）At the age of six, my father began to teach me English.

改为:When I was six, my father began to teach me English.

4) Having carried out economic reforms in our country, people's living standard has greatly improve  

改为:Having carried out economic reforms in our country, people have greatly improved living standard.

5) To improve one's writing skill, regular practice is essential.

改为:To improve one's writing skill, we need regular practice.

3．平行方面

1）While we reduce the number of vehicles, the speed of traffic can be increased.

改为:While the number of vehicles is reduced, the speed of traffic can be increased.

2）The price of milk isn' t higher than grain.

改为:The price of milk isn' t higher than that of grain.

3）The energy problem is currently of great concern to a nation, the world, and human be璱ngs.

改为:The energy problem is currently of great concern to a nation, to the world, and to human be璱ngs.

4）But other people argue that everyone has a certain opportunity and a wise man will never lose it whenever it arises.

改为:But other people argue that everyone has a certain opportunity and that a wise man will never lose it whenever it arises.

5）Before I selected the new course, my teacher warned me of the difficulty of the course and how long it lasted.

改为:Before I selected the new course, my teacher warned me of the difficulty of the course and of the length of it.

6）Making cities greener has a lot of advantages, such as its improvement of our environ璵ent, its contribution to our industry and its making our cities beautiful.

改为:Making cities greener has a lot of advantages, such as its improvement of our environ璵ent, its contribution to our industry and its beautification of our cities.

 

4. 语法方面

1）Narrow streets easily cause to happen many traffic accidents.

改为:Narrow streets easily cause many traffic accidents.

2）A great change has been taken place since then.

改为:A great change has taken place then.

3）But it may occur some new problems.

改为:But some new problems may occur.

4）Opportunities are only belonged to those who work hard.

改为:Opportunities only belonge to those who work hard.

5）Green trees can protect our air from polluting.

改为:Green trees can protect our air from being polluted.

6）Comparing with other countries, China pays little attention to the energy problem.

改为:Compared with other countries, China pays little attention to the energy problem.

5. 搭配方面

1）However the speed of a car is much faster than that of a bicycle.

改为：However the speed of a car is much higher than that of a bicycle.

2）In the past the price of milk was so expensive that most families could not afford it.

改为:In the past the price of milk was so high that most families could not afford it.

3）We should study/learn as much knowledge as possible so that we can be fully prepared for the future.

改为:We should get as much knowledge as possible so that we can be fully prepared for the future.

4）The opportunity to be promoted in a joint venture will be smaller if one cannot speak Eng璴ish.

改为:The opportunity to be promoted in a joint venture will be less if one cannot speak Eng璴ish.

6. 赘言问题

1）In my opinion, I believe the free medical system is in need of reform.

改为:In my opinion, the free medical system is in need of reform.

2）People try to find a solution to solve the problem.

改为:People try to find a solution to the problem.

3) Many visitors who visit our city have the impression that there are few trees in the street.

改为:Many visitors of our city have the impression that there are few trees in the street.

4) The reason why people choose to live in the country is because there is no pollution or noise there.

改为:The reason why people choose to live in the country is that there is no pollution or noise there.

5)1 have to rewrite my composition again.

改为:1 have to rewrite my composition.

7. 汉化问题

1）Traffic is a serious problem, one of the reasons is that Shanghai has over ten million peo璸le.

改为:Traffic is a serious problem, one of the reasons is that there are over ten million peo璸le in Shanghai.

2）My level of English has thus been improved.

改为:My English has thus been improved.

3）Nowadays young people who seek to go abroad are becoming more and more.

改为:Nowadays more and more young people seek to go abroad.

4)   With the development of cities, green land becomes more and more less.

改为:With the development of cities, there is less and less green land.

5) Smoking will do harm to our body.

改为:Smoking will do harm to heath.

6) We should put out hearts into the study.

改为:We should pay attention to the study.