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40 澳德作文题库 人口趋势 Describe the trend of population
(2007-08-05 14:48:01)
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The following graph shows the trend of population. You
are asked to describe it within 100 words. Be noted that the solid
line indicates the actual figures and the dotted line gives the
population projection. Be aware that the statistics used in this
graph are just made up .
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Passage 1
The carton describes the developing trend of China'population.The solid represents the amounts of population till now,and the dotted represents a prediction around China's future population.According the carton we can see,China's population reachs the peak to 14billion by 2002.Then,it appears a declining trend from 2002 to 2005.After that,the population shows a little bit of increasing.But a turnning point will appear in 2020.At that time,the population of China would probably decline dramaticly.
讲评：
A carton is a box or container.
Passage 2
The line chart gives us a vivid description about the trend of population in China.The only one line is made up of two parts representing two kinds of meanings.The solid part indicates the actual figures from 1996 to 2007,and the dotted part gives the population projection in the coming years.From the line beginning we can know that,by 1996 China's population reach 12 billions.After that,the population of China shows a dramaticly increase ,and hits the high to 14 billions by 2002.During the years followed from 2002 to 2007,the population always keeps up a stable level.But a powerful estimation suddenly appears in front of us,the population declining soon.Compared with that of the last decade,the population of the next period from 2007 to 2030 exactly shows an opposite situation.By 2030,it reduces to 10 billions maybe.In my opinion ,this trend is a good thing for China's development.
讲评：
主谓一致。 the population reach 12 billions?
12 billions? 世界总人口是多少？
是否可以用一个副词来修饰名词？a dramaticly increase.
a powerful estimation?
改写： ......appears in front of us, the population declining soon.
Passage 3
The Population Trend in China
From the curve we can see that the population trend of China.The solid shows that the population was reach the peak in 2002.Form 2002 to 2005 the population had began to decline.Form 2005 to 2020 the population circumstance keeps steady all the time.The dotied pridict that after 2020 the population will decline speedly.According to the pridiction.I believe that the main reason of the population's decline is as a result of modern young people's pursue freedom.With the converting idears of young people,they no longer likes the regular life style as their parents and grandparents.For example,marriage and bear child,instead of this they more likely to pursue personality life style.Most of the young people will give up the right to bear child,so the population will be decline after 2020.
讲评：we can see that的后面应该解一个从句，如果不是从句，就应该把that去掉。
was reach the peak不符合语法。
注意拼写： from not form.
the population circumstance keeps steady all the time中的circumstance是多余的。
注意拼写: predict not pridict
注意语法中主谓一致： the dotted line predicts
a result of modern young people's pursue freedom中， pursue是动词。这里可以采用这样的结构;
the result of modern young people pursuing freedom.
但是仍然没有说明：why is the decline of population related to young people's pursuing freedom?
converting?
they no long likes? 应该是they no long like the regular life style。认为the regular life style 应该是the old life style。
bear是一个动词， 此处可以用动名词来表示bearing children
更可能 be more likely to do something
可能没有personality life style这样的表示方法。
give up the right to bear child视乎应该是choose not to bear child
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