再谈--twilight (暮光之城)提高写作篇
(2009-05-03 21:25:28)
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分类: 和猪姐姐学英语 |
twilight (暮光之城)里的英文可谓是经典中的经典,简单易懂,意味深刻。尤其描写人物的语言让人极度佩服
建议大家这样用这套书:
第一遍以看故事情节为主,真正融入到故事情节里
第二遍对照中文译本认真学习每句话,做好摘抄工作
比如来看看我都摘抄了哪些?
1 描写爱德华的姐姐:She had a beautiful figure, the kind you saw on the cover of the Sports illustrated swimsuit issue, the kind that made every girl around her take a hit on her self-esteem just by being in the same room. They were faces you never expected to see except perhaps on the airbrushed pages of a fashion magazine or painted by an old master as the face of an angel.。只要和她呆着同一件屋自尊心就会受到打击,侧面描写了她的美
2 描写爱德华:His hair carefully gelled into orderly spikes 一簇一簇的头发.He was dressed exceptionally well; simply, but in clothes that subtly hinted at designer origins. Wich his remarkable good look, the style with which he carried himself, he could have worn dishrags and pulled it off 即使他穿上了洗碗布,也能迷倒一大片. He smiled widely, flashing a set of perfect, ultrawhite teeth. 他大笑,露出一排雪白的牙齿
3 描写我看到爱德华的场面:My stomach did frightened little flips at the thought of sitting next to him again.我的胃翻腾了几下.My mind was spinning with confusion我晕头转向。I grimaced at him, resisting the impulse to stick out my tongue like a five-year-old ,and looked away.我冲他做了鬼脸,忍住了像5岁小孩那样吐舌头的冲动。I was unconditionally and irrevocably in love with him.我无可救药地爱上了他。
4 描写下雨天:It was raining, washing all traces of the snow away in clear, icy ribbons down the side of the walkway天下雨了,把所有的积雪都冲刷一空,像一根明净,冰冷的缎带顺着人行道流走了
5 一些有用的短语:an unintentional note of petulance 并非有意的任性
.......................大家慢慢摘抄吧~~~

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