前一段留了一次电子作业，要求大家写一篇关于Summer Vacation 的作文，发到我的邮箱，很多同学积极地完成本次作业，包括以下同学：

初二２　

　张卓然　彭玉颜　赵英龙　王泽浩　马羽晴　方子元　任逸飞　靳曲　

　魏正如　徐可欣　徐恺玥　赵洁璇　张润　方劼　吴霰　赵亦蒙　杨冰琳　　郑琦霏　王子千　刘亚涵　王涵

初二８

　黄楚晴　马舒媛　顾赵婉郁　贺润琪　吴璇　杨涧秋　吴苏立　曹雨晗

　王昭玥　刘霄　刘子瑜　孙若溦　王爵　颜雨　赵一鸣　马越　刘扬　

　戴宇涵　胡雨孟　郭智洋　孙博雅　夏蕊　方菁菁　李欣然　孙宇光 孟悦

　　　　我从以上同学的作文中挑选出了几篇，作为范文供大家赏析。（注：红色字体为我修改部分）

　　　　　　 Summer Vacation by 顾赵婉郁
   Hi ! Mrs. Song,  I' m GuZhaowanyu. Do you want to know what I did on summer vacation? I had a fantastic time on summer vacation.  Now, let me tell you something about it. Every morning I woke up at seven o'clock. My mother said："You can't go to bed later ,because it isn't good for your health." I got out of bed and had breakfast. After that I did my homework and helped my mother with the housework. Sometimes we played outside. One Saturday morning I went to the National Art Galley with my classmates. We saw an exhibition of popular paintings. It was very interesting. On summer vacation we also visited some places. And we took lots of photos, bought many souvenirs and ate typical food. We had a picnic. I fished in the river, but I didn't catch any. We went to the gym. In the swimming
pool, we practiced swimming.  I enjoyed myself a lot. What wonderful memories! I can' believe summer vacation is over!

                                    My summer vacation by 吴苏立

    I enjoy summer vacation very much. Because my summer vacation was very interesting. I can do many things in summer. I played basketball every day, I made lots of friends. I often play computer games with my brother. I went to XinJiang with my mother. It is very beautiful. There are green plants, clean rivers and lots of mountains. I love there.

      My summer vacation is very funny. I love my summer vacation.

                  My Summer Vacation by 王涵

   On this summer vacation I took part in a lot of interesting activities. At the beginning of summer vacation, I did my homework first. When I finished most of my homework, I went to Ukraine to join an International Children’s Day Summer Camp. There were about 40 countries' children there. We all lived in a camp and had a lot of interesting activities every day. The camp is near the Black Sea and we can see the Black Sea in our room which was really wonderful! I went there from July nineteenth to August fourth. I had an excellent time there. And from August twelveth, we went on the military training. It’s really hard! My summer vacation is really wonderful and significant! I had a good time!

                    My summer vacation by 刘子瑜

     I went to Hongkong on my summer vacation with my father and my mother. Hongkong isn’t very big but there are a large crowd of people there. I like Disneyland and ocean park best. I played different kinds of rides，but there were lots of people from all over the world. It was very hot but we were still very happy. We also saw the dolphin show in the ocean park and it was wonderful. I had a unforgettable vacation.

Last summer vacation by 彭玉颜

  Last summer vacation was really cool. It was my younger sister’s birthday. On that day I organized a birthday party with my sister. In the morning, I went to the toy store and bought a beautiful doll. That was my sister’s present. Then I dressed the room with my mom. In the afternoon, I went to the clothes shop and bought a pretty pink dress. At last, I went to the bakery and bought her a favorite chocolate cake. In the evening, we got ready for the party. My younger sister dressed very lovely. I gave the present  to her. I put the birthday hat on her head. She was very happy. Then we cut the cake and sang the birthday song. “Happy birthday to you, happy birthday to you.”Oh, my younger sister became one year older. We ate the birthday cake. It was delicious. We had a good time. It was a great day. We felt very happy.

My Summer Vacation by 孙若溦

      This summer vacation I went to ShanDong province. I went to QingDao with my family. And we went there by train. At first, we went to the park. There were many trees and a lot of flowers. They were very beautiful. And we took many photos. After that, we ate some seafood. They were very delicious. On next day, we went to The Qingdao International Sailing Center. It was so big. We bought lots of souvenir. Finally, we visited The Ocean Park. We saw many pictures and a lot of marine animals. They were amazing and very interesting! I had a good time.