对于高考英语各题型来说,提分最快的非书面表达莫属。
今天分享一个我总结归纳的一个写作专题训练:句子扩展。
通俗地说,句子扩展就是在一个包含主谓宾的句子的基础上,添加定语、状语或补语。
■添加定语
1.The boy is a student.
1)The handsome boy is a
student. 2)The
boy in the room is a student.
3) The boy who is singing is a
student. 4)The
boy playing basketball is a student.
5) The boy laughed at is a
student. 6) The
boy to be praised is a student.
7) The boy there is a
student. ( 副词做定语,只限于地点副词)
2.This will give you some idea.
1)This will give you some idea for solving this problem.
2)This will give you some idea of what relativity means.
■添加状语
1.Some students became worried.
Seeing this, some students became very worried.(现在分词做状语,表示程度)
2.He jumped.
Hearing the news, he jumped with joy.(现在分词做状语,表示时间)
3.We’ll try our best to help him.
Moved by the story, we’ll try our best to help him.(过去分词作状语,表示原因)
Because we were moved by the story, we’ll try our best to help him.
4.We should study hard.
As we all know,“Practice makes perfect”. So we should study hard.(添加谚语)
5.He fell onto the floor and hurt himself.
Suddenly, he fell onto the floor and hurt himself badly.(放在句首或句尾)
6. His heart danced crazily, then became normal again.
His heart danced crazily for a moment, then became normal again.
7.The film was a great disappointment to me.
To tell the truth, the film is a great disappointment to me.(放在句首作独立成分,
评注式状语)
8.You should stop smoking now.你现在应该戒烟了。
---You should give up smoking now, for the sake of
your own health, for the sake of the health of others, for the sake
of your family, and for the sake of the entire world.
为了你自己的健康,为了他人的健康,为了你的家庭,也为了整个世界,你现在应该戒烟了。
9.We can be informed of a lot by reading
books.通过阅读书籍我们可以了解很多东西。
---By reading scientific books, we can be informed of many
facts; by reading geography, we know the earth' s surface, forms,
physical features, ect.; by reading history, we are told of the
growth of the nations.
通过阅读科技书籍,我们可以了解许多事实;通过阅读地理,我们知道了地球的表面、结构和地貌特征等;通过阅读历史,我们了解到世界的发展过程。
■添加补语
1.He has to be strict with his students.
As a teacher, he has to be strict with his students.(放在句首作主语补语)
2.I know this.I know this to be a fact.(放在宾语后作宾补)
3.I saw a naughty boy.I saw a naughty boy hitting the dog.(宾语后作宾补)
■添加同位语
Mr. Smith will speak at the meeting.
Mr. Smith, the chairman of the committee, will speak at the meeting.
■添加独立独立主格结构
We started looking for jobs.
All our savings gone, we started looking for jobs.(名词
过去分词作独立结构)
■添加多层修饰语
1. He is sleeping.
1)He is sleeping in class. 2) He
is sleeping soundly in the English class.
3) He is sleeping soundly in the English class when the teacher
calls his name.
4) He, who attended his friend’s birthday party till midnight
yesterday, is sleeping soundly in the English class when the
teacher calls his name.
2.You will find speaking English difficult if you
can't keep practicing it.
1)Students always find speaking English quite difficult since
they can't obtain a good way to practice it.
2)Students in senior high school may face quite a few problems
in speaking English as they are too busy preparing their final
examinations to practice it.
3)Students in senior high school may face quite a few problems
in speaking English as they are too busy preparing their final
examinations and thus pay little attention to the importance of
speaking.
3.I read an book.
1)I read an
English book. 2)I
read an English book I like.
3)I read an English book I
likeyesterday.
4)I read an English book I
likeyesterdayin the library.
5)Yesterday morning I went to the library. I
found an interesting book called HARRY POTTER to
read.
4.The girl is very beautiful.
1)The girl in red is very beautiful.
2)The girl in red standing in front of me is very
beautiful.
3) The girl in red with long black hair standing in front of
me is very beautiful.
4) The girl in red with long black hair standing in front of
me is extremely attractive.
5) The girl in red with long black hair standing in front of
me is so attractive that I can hardly
breathe when I see her for the first time.
6) The girl in red with long black hair standing in front
of me is so attractive that I can hardly
breathe at the first sight of her.
5.We'd better to keep company with the true
friends. 我们最好和对我们有帮助的朋友交往。
As friends are both helpful and disastrous, it is better to keep
company with the true friends who are helpful, encouraging and
loyal, but to avoid those who are mean, stingy and treacherous.
由于既有有助于我们的朋友,也有有害于我们的朋友,因此我们最好和那些对我们有所帮助、有所鼓励和忠实的真正朋友交往,而要避免和那些庸的、吝啬的、奸诈的人交往。
6.Doctors think that an active person should have a
restful hobby, while a person who sits at a desk should have a
lively
hobby.医生认为爱好活动的人应该有安静型的业余爱好,而伏案工作的人应该有着活动型的业余爱好。
Doctors think that an active person, such as a baseball player or a
swimmer, should have a restful hobby such as reading, collections
of stamps, dolls, buttons or shells, etc. , while a person who
sits at a desk all day, such as a teacher or a doctor should
have a lively hobby such as tennis, golf, swimming or skating.
医生认为,像棒球选手或游泳运动员这类爱好活动的人应该有安静型的业余爱好,比如阅读、收藏邮票、收藏布娃娃、收藏钮扣、收藏贝壳等,而整日伏案工作的人如教师或医生,就应该有打网球、打高尔夫球、游泳或者滑冰这类活动型的业余爱好。
软实力英语高考英语写作专题训练----句子扩展
The boy is playing.
1)添加宾语 ____________________________________________________________________
2)添加状语 ___________________________________________________________________
3)给主语加定语(从句)________________________________________________________
4)给宾语加定语
________________________________________________________________
5) 添加with复合结构
__________________________________________________________
6) 添加同位语
________________________________________________________________
7)添加名词性从句
____________________________________________________________
8)添加状语从句
_______________________________________________________________
9)添加非谓语动词
______________________________________________________________
10)添加谚语
__________________________________________________________________
一、根据要求,扩充下面的句子
1、Juliana walked by the side of the river for six more days.(用形容词扩充)
2、She could hear planes above the trees.(用副词扩充)
3、Another teacher asked me if I had always been blind.(加介词词组作定语)
4、My eyes started to fail.(加介词词组作状语)
5、He gave me a lot of meat, a lot of dishes, and a lot of pigs.(加不定式词组作定语)
6、But she was quite surprised.(加不定式词组作状语)
7、I would like to choose this stool.(加不定式词组作宾补)
8、The girl made a short speech.(加现在分词作定语)
9、He was knocked down by the running bus.(加现在分词作状语)
10、She served eggs to the young soldier. (加过去分词作定语)
11、Gandhi invented the principle of nonviolent resistance.(加过去分词作定语)
12、Mr. Clinton was once involved in a sex scandal.(用同位语扩充)
13、The man is not on the train.(用定语从句扩充)
14、It will warm up a little bit on Sunday.(用时间状语从句扩充)
15、Put in articles in the following passage.(用地点状语从句扩充)
16、I will ask someone else for help.(用原因状语从句扩充)
17、He got so little pay.(用结果状语从句扩充)
18、I will show you how this works.(用目的状语从句扩充)
19、You can come to the concert.(用条件状语从句扩充)
20、I don’t believe it.(用让步状语从句扩充)
二、提示: 5个意思相关联的简单句,可帮助记忆5个基本句型。
①Mary was a girl. ②She smiled. ③Tom liked her. ④He gave her a picture.
⑤She put the picture on the wall.
练习一.根据要求在空格处填上合适的修饰成分: 提示:可试着写出一个与众不同的答案。
1. Mary was a(n) ______________ girl. (形容词)
2. She smiled ___________________. (副词)
3. Tom liked her__________________. (副词)
4. He gave her a picture ________________. (定语从句)
5. She put the picture on the wall __________________ . (状语从句)
练习二. 在空格处填上并列的成分。
Mary was a beautiful and ①____________________ girl. Tom and ②__________ liked her very much. They soon became good friends. On Mary’s birthday, Tom gave her a picture and
③______________________________________________, She smiled happily,
④_____________________________________ them and put the picture on the wall.
三、翻译扩展
1、电脑技术给我们带来好处。
(1)电脑技术给我们带来明显的好处。
(2)尽管如此,我们不能否认电脑技术给年轻人带来的明显的好处。
2、网络是一把钥匙。
(1)网络是打开知识和信息的一把钥匙。
(2)网络是打开世界上所有知识和信息的一把钥匙。
诚然,要想在高考书面表达上得高分,离不开广泛地阅读和大量地练习。
任何技巧都是在基础扎实的情况下的锦上添花,千万不能舍本逐末!
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