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考研英语2005作文“养老足球赛”范文

(2007-04-13 19:10:42)
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下面的文章是我用模板和一些自造的句子写成的范文,同学们仔细体会。最后一段套用的比较多。
 

图画描述段:

This thought-provoking cartoon has made me burst into tears the moment I see it. As is depicted in the cartoon, an old man’s three sons and only daughter are having a football match. (一位老人的三个儿子和一个女儿在进行一场足球赛)They all attempt to kick the football, their miserable father, into others’ goal while keeping their own.(他们都企图将那个足球,也就是他们的老父亲,往别人的球门里踢,同时守好自己的门)Obviouslythe aged father has become something even his children are unwilling to accept(显然,老父亲成了即便是自己的亲生儿女也不愿意接收的废物).

 

寓意阐释段:

Why are children so unwilling to support (可换为care for) the old (可换为their old parent)? For one thing, these children are spoiled when they are young, so they become very selfish and have no sense of responsibility. When they become adults, they do not want to take care of their father. (可以改写为:these children are so spoiled when young that they turn out to be very selfish and self-centered and lack the sense of responsibility when grown up, and so it is natural that as adults they abandon their aged father). For another, old people (可换为most wretched fathers) have no money (可换为may have no old-age pension), and they are weak. They are often ill. Their children will consider their elderly a financial burden. (可写成Since the wretched father is weakvulnerable and is likely to be stricken with chronic and acute diseases such as heart attack or high blood pressure, his sons and daughters will most probably identify him as a heavy financial burden. 分值更高)

 

解决问题段:

 

In view of the seriousness/graveness/severity of this problem/misconduct, effective/tough measures must be taken before things get worse/worsen/deteriorate. First, it is essential that regulations be worked out/drafted and passed and enforced to protect old people. Secondly, sons and daughters should enhance their awareness of respecting the old and taking care of them. With proper laws and an alert public, it will only be a matter of time for unfilialness to become a thing of the past/extinct.

 

 

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