三人写一首诗
(2014-03-11 11:00:02)分类: 读书札记 |
三人写一首诗
今天上课,老师让我们学写韩国诗歌中的联句(linked verse)。和我一组的两个学生都是年轻人,我们每人要写两句,共同组成一个完整的诗歌意象。
看了他们的诗句,我仿佛读到了如今年轻人的彷徨和渴望。为了和他们一起彷徨,我也写了两句彷徨(最后两行
中美两代人,一起在诗歌里彷徨吧。
Why does the night thicken in darkness as the hour’s progresses?
Its darkness lingering moods related to human mood.
I stared at the empty nothingness and a stir of fear freezes my heart.
My eyes illustrate my greatest fears and my fears glared with greedy pleasure. (B)
I walk lonely and desperately in the dark
I do not know where I am going to (C)