在二宝的初三英文作文课上,老师给大家布置了这样的作业:写一个虚构故事的梗概,这个故事要有深度,可以扩充为一部小说。学生们交上这个作业后,老师从全班的作业中先挑出四篇优秀作文,然后再评选出最后一篇优胜者。这篇获奖作文将成为全班同学的写作大纲。按照故事梗概,有人写第一章,有人写第二章,依此类推,最后全班同学共同完成这部小说。今晚我得知,二宝的作文被幸运选上,成了四篇优秀作文中的一篇
我读了读,很有点儿<<鲁宾逊漂流记>>的味道。这孩子很有写作天赋,我挺服气的。11-9-11
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Modern Odyssey
A man is on his way home from the war in Iraq. His wife, children,
and mother are at home in the United States waiting for him. On the
way home his plane runs out of fuel and he and his men crash into
Africa. His men die, but he miraculously survives, although
seriously injured. He is close to dying but is nursed back to
health by an African woman. This woman’s husband is suspicious and
jealous of the man’s friendship with the woman, so he sends him out
of the community. He travels on foot to the west coast of the
continent. He goes to the shore and with the help of an American
missionary he is to be taken home to the United States by ship. The
night that they travel, a massive storm occurs and the ship is
capsized. The two survive and drift to a small, unmapped island. He
borrows the missionary’s cell phone and tries to call his family
but finds that there is no service on the island. They spend the
night there but find in the morning the island is inhabited by
cannibals. The missionary is tragically killed and eaten, but the
man survives. Finding a hollow log, he boats to the Bahamas. He
sneaks onto a cruise ship and sails to Florida, and he always hides
in the maid’s cabin. The boat eventually makes
its way to Maine and it docks. He walks back home and finds his
family, but they barely recognize the man. They test him on the
place he and his wife honeymooned and passed. His family welcomes
him and they are reunited.
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