志杰，你好！

    知道你小孙子读书很好，小学就在外面上辅导班。上次看见他写的作文，只要坚持下去就会又提高。下面是一篇初三英语作文，给你小孙子作参考。因为我每次批改两个孩子的作文（包括英语和语文）都写在我的博客上并转发到他们的手机上，以便他们注意改正。

顺便说一句：英语作文一定要写题目，否则要扣分的。

Make Our Hometown Beautiful

  As a popular saying says:"Better city, better life." In my view, my hometown is becoming more and more beautiful and it (likes)is like a park. But there (are)is more and more rubbish in our city than before. It's a pity that people live in a (duty)dirty place. So we must do our best to make our city clean and beautiful. Anyone mustn't throw rubbish in the streets and public places,especially plastic bags. If everyone cares about his or her behaviours, our hometown can certainly (becomes) become more and more beautiful. 

以上红色为错误用法。