加载中…新东方考研英语写作分册（19）
(2009-03-26 11:22:04)
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考研英语写作常见语言错误
I.词法错误
A. Article 冠词
(1) a. The machines could not run and people would have to fall back on their hands to produce what are essential for them to keep alive.
b. Machines could not run and people would have to fall back on their hands to produce what are essential for them to keep alive.
(2) a. Pollution is the biggest problem of the cities.
b. Pollution is the biggest problem of the cities.
(3) a. The housing problem in big cities is rather a headache to both government and people.
b. The housing problem in big cities is rather a headache to both the government and people.
(4) a. Bicycle is the most common means of transport in our country.
b. The bicycle/A bicycle is the most common means of transport in our country.
(5) a. On the contrary, the percentages of milk and meat are on a rise.
b. On the contrary, the percentages of milk and meat are on the rise.
(6) a. We can’t avoid being beaten by the others.
b. We can’t avoid being beaten by others.
(7) a. And once the artificial-intelligent robots were put into use, what would these clever “people” do to their producers?
b. And once robots with artificial-intelligence were put into use, what would these clever “people” do to their producers?
(8) a. For an example, with the wide adoption of the automatic working apparatuses, more and more people will lose their jobs in the future.
b. For example, with the wide adoption of the automatic working apparatuses, more and more people will lose their jobs in the future.
(9) a. Almost everyday I open TV at 6:30 p.m. and wait for the news program.
b. Almost everyday I turn on the TV at 6:30 p.m. and wait for the news program.
(10)
b. Then, during the second part, we’re showed some pictures of foreign places and customs.
(11)
b. My favourite programme is called “Animal World”, which is provided by CCTV every Sunday night.
(12)
b. It provides us with views of natural scenes and a look of the life style of all kinds of wild animals, with an explanation by the narrator.
(13)
b. Not only do the leaders of countries often visit the foreign countries, but also the common people visit abroad.
(14)
b. I think they are questions of great interest.
(15)
b. Generally speaking, the bad ads can be classified into two categories. One category has a bad purpose. The advertisers want to sell things like cigarettes, alcohol, and guns. ...The other category of bad ads are those in which the advertiser use violence and sex to promote their sales.
(16)
b. This seems to be in fashion now.
(17)
b. And also, they treat firecrackers as the heritage of the Chinese culture.
(18)
b. Finally we can teach ourselves and learn new knowledge.
(19)
b. A higher English level will help you to find a satisfactory job in the future.
(20)
b. Some students with majors like chemistry, math or physics would think that when they graduate from college they’ll not use English any more.
(21)
b. Such an opinion leads to a shocking waste of water.
(22)
b. And the wide spread of education is also a good reason.
(23)
b. The given graph tells us the changes of life expectancy and infant mortality in the developing countries in 1960 and 1990.
(24)
b. There are other countless examples. In a word, we must keep the proverb in mind for a lifetime——Practice makes perfect.
(25)
b. Community services is a golden chance to use our ability, through which we can learn to cooperate with people and contribute our intelligence to society.
(26)
b. I don’t think numbers have anything to do with luck.
B. Nouns 名词
-可数名词
1)
b. Even a lot of entertainment such as TV, recordings and films need electricity.
2)
b. People who suggested this said that one cause of the heavy traffic is traffic accidents.
3)
b. Two solutions have been recommended so far, and each one has both advantages and disadvantages.
4)
b. Human beings have lived in this world for thousands of years. They have fought against nature from time to time and they have survived.
5)
b. As long as we don’t give up keeping believing in ourselves, and in the meantime learn something from failure, we’ll certainly make our mark in the end.
6)
b. With money we can travel widely and have more experiences.
7)
b. What money will ring you depends on your personal beliefs and goals in life.
8)
b. During this process, the job interview has arisen and appeared more and more important.
9)
b. First, the interviewer can tell something about the job to the interviewee such as the wages, the working conditions and something else which is relevant to the job.
10)
b. They think that fresh water comes from such a variety of sources that it is always sufficient for use.
11)
b. The primary cause is that we can expand our horizons.
12)
b. In their opinion, people who change their jobs frequently are imprudent and tactless.
13)
b. They range from foods, clothes to radios, TV sets, and even medicines are fake, which has brought a lot of troubles to our daily life.
14)
b. First, the government should forbid the fake commodities by law.
-不可数名词
1)
b. The fresh air and beautiful scenery will attract people to leave the overcrowded city.
2)
b. Nowadays radio and TV play a more and more important role in our daily life.
3)
b. For example, setting off firecrackers often sets fire to buildings, and causes a lot of damage.
4)
b. They think only when they are devoted to one job can they do it well.
-集合名词
1)
b. Even a lot of entertainment such as TV, recordings and films need electricity.
-名词前的数量
1)
b. A great number of new subjects, which are actually derived from both natural and social science, has come into existence and enriched the sea of human knowledge greatly.
-用词不当
1)
b. They have little chance to find work.
2)
b. They don’t get equal pay for equal work.
3)
b. For example, a reporter can use it in interviews instead of the old means of writing them on a notebook.
4)
b. Furthermore, recordings which contain sex and violence will lead young people into evil ways and do harm to their growth.
5)
b. With more and more people coming into this world, human beings are now in danger of food shortage because the amount of land on which man can grow food crops remains the same.
6)
b. It can lessen the crowdedness of streets and speed up the flow of traffic.
7)
b. In spite of all this, the green process is relatively slow compared with cities in other countries.
8)
b. In the meantime, the grain consumption in people’s diet consequently kept dropping.
9)
b. With the improvement of the standard of living, people now can afford to buy more milk and meat than before.
10)
b. Two new roads were finished at the end of last year, and are expected to open to traffic soon.
11)
b. There are many factors which have caused such a change.
12)
b. Learning English is not an easy task.
13)
b. They will push our society to a higher level of development.
14)
b. Through participation, everyone can learn that on the playing field he not only competes for himself but also for his team.
15)
b. Motorcycles are much cheaper and consume much less gas than cars.
16)
b. I believe one day motorcycles will become the most widely used vehicles in China.
17)
b. Motorcycles, as a new type of vehicle, are accepted by more and more people.
18)
b. And the most important character is its fast pace.
19)
b. On the one hand, the interviewer can introduce the main aspects of the job opening to the interviewee, such as the specific requirements for the job, the working conditions, and the wages and benefits the interviewee will get.
20)
b. Today when a person is hunting for a job, there are almost always job interviews.
21)
b. However, there are still a few citizens who expect the government to call off this ban.
22)
b. Now there are two-day weekend in China.
23)
b. However, some people still believe that fresh water supply is quite adequate for us.
24)
b. You should be trained under the direction of an instructor.
25)
b. We ignore the natural laws completely and what turned out was a nationwide waste of resources.
26)
b. Suppose a student is expected to show up and give his presentation at class soon. He is in such a hurry that he leaves his manuscript at home.
27)
b. I think a permanent pursuit means nothing will become stagnant, because whatever career it is, once you devote yourself to it, it can give you pleasure and excitement.
28)
b. The magic power of the lucky numbers is just the illusion s of some people.
29)
b. They hope their call numbers, car numbers and other codes will all include the figure 8.
30)
b. Some people think that certain numbers will bring good luck to them. With such a belief, they always want to get lucky numbers whatever they are doing.
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