第一次用英语写小说,我都快把自己给折磨疯了我。。目前还完全找不到语感啊。
其实这个故事,从一开始我就想用中文写来着,可刚一写开头我就被这封英文的邀请信给难倒了,怎么翻译都翻不过来啊。。所以逼得我只好不得不开始用英语写了。半吊子就半吊子吧。。
引子
1st November 2013
An Invitation
Dear All Friends,
You are invited to my new house warming party plus my daughter Amy’s first year Birthday Party on Sunday 22nd November 2013. Your family and friends are all welcome. The party starts at 1pm until late midnight. Please be aware that there are less trains than usual as it’s a Sunday. My new home address is:
No.21 Sheffield road, Hertfordshire, Greater London, HA6 3AD.
I look forward to seeing you in the party!
Best wishes,
Jennifer Li-Alexandra
* * *
I received the invitation from Jennifer, one of my long term girl friends. She called me one day after work and said she just moved home with her husband and one year old daughter and was throwing a house warming party.
‘I will be there, of course.’ I answered.
‘Great! That’s great. I will send you the address and details later.’ Jennifer said, ‘It would be either the second weekend of November, or the third one, and it should be on Sunday.’
‘Why Sunday? You know there’s less train and transport on Sunday----I suppose your new house is at countryside and is out of London.’ I said.
‘Yes, but Annie has a job on Saturday, you know that?’ she said.
‘Oh, oh yes, you mean her teaching job?’ I realized, ‘but I’ve heard she was going to quit that job? Last time when she talked to me, she said so.’
‘I don’t know, but she told me she can’t do Saturday, and that’s why I have to make the plan on Sunday.’ Jennifer said, ‘My brother in law is even living in Manchester! I think the Sunday train will be much more inconvenient for him, but well, you know, I just wish all of you to join the party.’
‘Yes indeed, don’t worry Jennifer, I will be there. I will check the train schedule and go to see you new house! Also I can’t wait to see your little girl. I can’t believe she is almost one year old now! Last time when I saw her, she was just a little sleeping doll.’
‘Trust me, she has never being a sleeping doll at home, sometimes she woke up at midnight and cried until 3 or 4 in the morning, made both my husband and I completely sleepless and exhausted.’She smiled and said.
‘All babies do. All babies.’ I smiled , ‘OK darling, see you in your new house!’
* * *
I searched the train time on London transport website with putting in Jennifer’s address, however it came out that I could only take train to Victoria, and then it advised me to take a coach or bus for 2 hours to reach her house. I was absolutely amazed, and then I was wondering how I could make this journey.
Right when I was wondering if I should give up or ask for Annie’s boyfriend Frank giving me a lift, one of my ex-boyfriends, John sent a nonsense text message to me. He always did this, texting me in any weekend he felt boring or whatever, then he would send me a text message, as a ‘friend’, to ‘just say hello’ or ‘how are you’ to me, no matter if I wanted this greeting or not.
‘hey, how are you Juliet?’ Even before opening my mobile, by seeing his name on the screen, I knew his content already.
Well, luckily, this time he got the right time. Yes, exactly right time, and for the very first time, he became the right person.
‘I am good, thank you.’I replied, ‘Actually, Jennifer is throwing a house warming party in her new home next Sunday, do you want to come over with me as friend? If so you can pick me up and drive to her house together.’
I am sorry that I just had to add the extra ‘as friend’ here, because if you knew him, you would know this little clarification is necessary. I just don’t want to cause any misunderstanding or trouble by inviting him, this ‘loyal’ ex-boyfriend, to this very personal house party as my company. He might have over thought about this if I had not put it clearly.
Surely he got my meaning. He thought a while, and then replied:
‘What time? I have a lunch date already, so won’t be free until the evening.’
Wow...What a surprise! He got a new date! I smiled and guessed this might be the real reason he suddenly texted me.
‘Should be in the evening. I will tell you the time once she confirmed.’I replied.
‘If in the evening, then it will work.’ he said, ‘Just let me know the time, address, etc so I can plan accordingly. John. x’
Of course I would, dear John.
Then I called Jennifer the next day.
‘Hello, has your party’s time set up yet?’I asked.
‘Yes it has. Annie won’t be free next week, as Frank needs to see his kids in the weekend, so we’ve set up the following Sunday, that is 22nd. Is this all right for you?’ Jennifer said.
Oh, if so, then John’s new date won’t be an issue anymore. Perfect.
‘Sure, no problem at all.’I said, ‘What time will it start?’
‘Well, you can come over anytime in the afternoon, such as 1 or 2pm.’
‘Ok, 2pm should be all right.’ I said, then I changed the topic, ‘by the way, have you invited Lorna?’
‘Oh yes, sure. I sent off the email invitation to all of you, including Lorna.’ She said.
‘So, did she say she will come or not?’ I had to ask further, just to be sure.
‘Yes, she said she will.’ Jennifer confirmed.
Then I said: ‘Ok darling, you know there are less trains running on Sunday and your new house is out of London zones already, it’d be quite difficult for me to go there by tube or train that day. So, I have asked John to drive me there, I hope you don’t mind if he is coming?’
Jennifer laughed in the phone: ‘Of course! Of course I won’t mind, he is more than welcome.’
They all knew my story, or ‘his’tory, about him. Here we four girls, Annie, Lorna, Jennifer and I, were very closed long term girl friends. Our sex and the city style friendship started six or seven years ago, when we were all singles. All of they three knew every side of my loving or hating moment, and vice versa, I knew all their tears and joys. Now Jennifer was the only one who actually got married, and then had a daughter.
‘Great!’ I was relieved, ‘ I hope this wouldn’t matter Lorna much.’
‘I don’t think Lorna would mind about John’s attendance at all.’ Maybe just for being politeness, she said so.
‘Well, I hope so, but you know they were not happy with each other, as far as I remember.’ I said, in a polite way too. If I was going to say the truth in my mind, then this word should be: darling, I knew what happened between them, one of my best girl friends and my ex-boyfriend----whatever you believe it or not, I just knew.
‘It should be all right.’ Jennifer said, ‘Even if they do mind, I have a big house and it has three living rooms, so you can be in separate rooms if you like.’
‘I am absolutely fine with both of them,’ I laughed at her funny idea, ‘ just hope they two are OK with each other so I asked. Anyway, see you there.’
‘Great!’ Jennifer said, ‘So I will email all of you a proper invitation with the new date and address, and see you on Sunday!’
----to be continued----