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2015年12月六级写作真题解析3：社交网络对阅读的影响
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2015年12月六级写作解析3：社交网络对阅读的影响
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should focus on the impact of social networking websites on reading. You are required to write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
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【解析】
本题是15年12月所考三个写作题目中最简单的，但如果不仔细审题则非常容易跑题的一个：因为很多同学可能注意到了reading，因而只写了“阅读的重要性”，也有同学注意到了facebook,
因而写了“社交网络对生活的影响”；但这都是只见树木，不见森林，写“社交网络对阅读的影响”才是正解。
可见审题的重要性。拿到作文之后的第一件事，一定是审题，且应从三个角度入手：即体裁 话题，内容要求和字数。
仔细审题，可知：体裁要求为essay、话题为the impact of social networking websites on
reading（社交媒体对阅读的影响）、内容要求具有较大的开放度，即focus
on；字数要求依然是150—180.
值得一提的是，命题不要求写题目，也未要求描述图画，只要求focus on(关注) the impact of social
networking websites on reading.
因此，不写题目和不描述图画必然不扣分，当然如果写题目和描述图画，只要正确也不会扣分。
该话题类似2012年6月、2013年12月和2014年12月的真题，聚焦于“科技对现代生活的影响”，基本可以套用，属于“新瓶装旧酒”。
【参考范文】
This is a simple, funny but thought-provoking carton, in which two
lovers are discussing about their hobby of reading. To our shock,
the guy tells his girlfriend, “I love reading. I read about 3 hours
a day. My favorite book is Face book”.
This picture, apparently, can be naturally associated with the
negative impact of social networks on reading. If individuals
intend to acquire and enjoy long-time pleasure of reading, it is
not advisable for them to read merely through networks. However, in
contemporary society, it is a common phenomenon for a host of
youngsters to spend too much time in reading, sharing and chatting
with friends on social networks. It is these websites that do not
enable teenagers to have adequate opportunities or time to read
traditional books. As a mtter of fact, intelligent people in large
numbers have come to realize the severe influences of this trend on
modern life: some young people have become addicted to these social
websites.
I, as a college student, am convinced that it is exceedingly
necessary for youngsters to read on socila networking websites, but
it is of greater necessity for them to spend traditional books,
like calssic novels, poems and essays. Do bear in mind: social
networks are just our tools and never can we become their
slaves.
【参考译文】
这是一幅简单，好玩但值得深思的图画。图画中，一对情侣正在讨论阅读的爱好。令人意外的是，男孩子告诉他的女朋友，“我喜欢阅读。我一天读3小时。我喜欢的书是‘脸书’”。
显然，这幅图能自然联系到社交网站对阅读的消极影响。如果人们想要得到并且享受长久的阅读乐趣，他们不能只是通过网络阅读。然而，在当今社会，很多年轻人都花费大把的时间在社交网络上阅读、与朋友讨论分享。正是这些网站没有使得年轻人有足够的机会和时间再去阅读传统书籍。事实上，很多智者都已经意识到这种趋势对现代生活的严重影响，即一些年轻人已经过度沉溺于这些社交网站。
作为一名大学生，我坚信年轻人有必要在社交网站阅读，但更重要的是他们应该阅读传统图书，例如经典小说、诗歌和文章等。牢记：社交网络只是我们的工具，我们永远不能成为他们的努力。
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should focus on the impact of social networking websites on reading. You are required to write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
【解析】
【参考范文】
【参考译文】
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