总评：

     2015年6月的四级作文整体而言中规中矩，全部在复习范围之内，而且名师天团的四级保命班上直接讲到了关于网络过度使用的图画作文，除首段外，只需更改一下主题词，几乎可以直接写第二三段的内容。此外，在本人所给出的预测作文中，还直接命中了父母与孩子教育这个话题。继2014年12月四级作文三篇全中之后，15年6月三中二也是不小的收获。其实更想说的是，只要熟练背诵了救命作文和功能表达，无论何种作文都不会成为写作的障碍。

真题解析1：父母在孩子成长中的作用

Directions: For this part, youare allowed 30 minutes to write an essay. You should start your essay with abrief description of the picture and comment on parents’ role in theirchildren’s growth. You should write at least 120 but no more than 180 words.

简析：拿到作文之后第一件事永远是审题，应关注三个方面：1.体裁—essay, 2.话题---parents’rolein their children’s growth, 3. 内容要求—a brief description of thepicture, and comment.

范文：

This is a simple but enlightening cartoon: a youngster informs a pieceof good news to her mother—“Good news mom! I was accepted to the college ofyour choice.” Apparently, the girl’s mother is exceedingly delighted to hearthis news.

This picture can be naturally associated with the parents’ role intheir children’s growth. Suppose parents intend to witness their kids’ success,it is not advisable for them to overprotect teenagers. In contemporary society,it has become a trend for a host of young people to depend on parents. Meanwhile,an increasing number of teenagers find it quite comfortable to enjoy this love.A case in point is the girl in the picture. However, it is parents’ protectionthat does not enable kids to build up adequate independence and competence toface the society by their own. As a matter of fact, intelligent parents inlarge numbers have come to realize the negative impacts of parents’overprotection for kids’ growth.

As a college student, I am convinced that it is of great necessity foryoungsters to enhance their quality by learning to face life independently. Thus,parents should educate, advocate and encourage their teenagers to cultivatethis awareness. (199)