第二节  书面表达 (满分25分)

假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括：

（1）时间和地点；

（2）内容：学习唐诗；

（3）课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【答案与分析】

One Possible Version

Dear Leslie,

How are you? I’m writing to tell you about your next Chinese lesson.

We’ll still meet at my school, but not on Saturday as usual, since I’ll have to participate in a sporting activity that day. So let’s make it three o’clock on Sunday afternoon.

As you know, in order to acquire a good knowledge of Chinese, you should learn more about the Chinese culture and history. Therefore, this time I will introduce Tang Poetry to you, which is of great help in learning Chinese. I advise you to learn about the brief history of the Tang dynasty in advance. It will surely help you in learning the poems.

Looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

 

试题趋势： 今年的书面表达要求考生写邮件，告知外国朋友汉语课的时间和内容 (属学校生活、语言学习范畴)。与往年相比最大的变化是涉及我国优秀的传统文化，这符合2017年英语高考大纲提出的：在英语学习上重视和突出中华传统价值观，重视语言应用，回归了英语作为语言功能的本质。因此，掌握一些传统文化方面的英语知识很有必要。

文体：书信体，一种常见的告知信，相对简单。

人物关系：朋友

问候语及开头语：        How are you? / How is everything going?  / How are things with you? /I am writing to you about…./ I am writing to tell you something about….

写信目的：告知上课时间，内容及课前准备

结束语    如：Looking forward to seeing you again. / Looking forward to your early reply. /Hope to hear from you soon / Best wishes.

个人发挥，适当增加相关细节

语言分析

话题词激活

学校生活：take part in, attend, activity, knowledge

语言学习：acquire, advises sb. to do sth.,在平时的学习中要注意话题词的积累。

运用高级句式：如：since引导的状语从句，which 引导的非限制性定语从句。

试题趋势： 今年的书面表达要求考生写邮件，告知外国朋友汉语课的时间和内容 (属学校生活、语言学习范畴)。与往年相比最大的变化是涉及我国优秀的传统文化，这符合2017年英语高考大纲提出的：在英语学习上重视和突出中华传统价值观，重视语言应用，回归了英语作为语言功能的本质。因此，掌握一些传统文化方面的英语知识很有必要。

文体：书信体，一种常见的告知信，相对简单。

人物关系：朋友

问候语及开头语：        How are you? / How is everything going?  / How are things with you? /I am writing to you about…./ I am writing to tell you something about….

写信目的：告知上课时间，内容及课前准备

结束语    如：Looking forward to seeing you again. / Looking forward to your early reply. /Hope to hear from you soon / Best wishes.

个人发挥，适当增加相关细节

语言分析

话题词激活

学校生活：take part in, attend, activity, knowledge

语言学习：acquire, advises sb. to do sth.,在平时的学习中要注意话题词的积累。

运用高级句式：如：since引导的状语从句，which 引导的非限制性定语从句。

参考范文1：

Dear Leslie,

This is Li Hua. I am writing to tell you the teaching plan for the Chinese lessons we’re going to have next time.

The lessons will be given in Guangming Middle School in our city and they will last seven days, from July 20 to 26, 2017. We’ll learn the Tang poems in class. The Tang poems are very famous and beautiful. Before you come to China, I think you’d better have a brief study about the history of the Tang Dynasty, which will help you better understand the poems and enjoy them.

Looking forward to seeing you again.

                                                                        Yours,                                                                                                                                                                              Li Hua                      

参考范文2：                                                                                                                                                                              

Dear Leslie,

I’m writing to tell you about the plan for your next Chinese lesson.

We’ll still meet at my school at three on Saturday afternoon. The learning will last a little longer this time since I’d like to introduce to you poetry of the Tang dynasty and that takes longer time. These poems are popular among Chinese people and also attract lots of foreigners. I believe you will like them too. Of course, you’d better make some preparation for it, so I suggest you learn about the brief history of Tang dynasty, which will surely help with your learning of the poems.

Hoping to hear from you soon.

                                                                   Yours,

                                                                 Li Hua

参考范文3：

Dear Leslie,

I’m writing to tell you about the change of the plan for your next Chinese lesson.

We’ll still meet at my school, but not on Saturday as usual, since I’ll have to visit my grandparents in another city that day. So let’s make it for three o’clock on Sunday afternoon.

As I told you, this time I will introduce to you poetry of Tang dynasty. They’re popular among Chinese people and also attract lots of foreigners. I believe you will like them too. Do you remember you need to make some preparation for it? I strongly recommend you learning about the brief history of Tang dynasty, which will surely help with your learning of the poems.

Hoping to hear from you soon.

                                                              Yours,

                                                              Li Hua

参考范文4：

Dear Leslie,

      Since our last learning period has been finished, I’m writing to inform you of some relevant

information about my next teaching plan.

      Above all, I will start the lesson in my home at 7 pm. next Saturday and it will last two hours. And we are going to learn something concerning Tang Poems, such as how to appreciate Tang Poems, how to read them with emotion, and so on. Besides, you are required to have a brief idea of the history of Tang Dynasty in advance.

      If you have any other questions, please do contact with me. May you make great progress in learning Chinese!

                                                                             Yours,

                                                                     Li Hua

 

 

参考范文5：

Dear Leslie,

I’m glad I can teach you Chinese and also I’m happy you have been making great progress in studying Chinese these days.  I’m writing to tell you something about my plan for my next Chinese class. 

It becoming hotter and hotter, and to order to save time, I’m planning to have our class next time from 8:00am to 11:30am on QQ video in our homes. Please enter QQ on time then. We’ll study something about Chinese Tang poetry. Therefore, please spend some time taking a brief look at the history of the Tang Dynasty outside of class in preparation for next class.

Yours sincerely

Li Hua

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