河北英语教师 冯秀菊
指导教师:江节明

导师修改稿:
I’m sad to see this picture.I have so much to say about the pollution in my hometown.When I was a child,I lived here happily. Then a clear river went through our village with many fish swimming
in it.The trees were green .The air was fresh. The sky was blue and clear.Those days our living condition was not very good, but we had many beautiful places to visit. As the morden factories are being built, the environment has been worse and worse. The factories are pouring waste water
into the river. Many fish have died. The water is not clean any longer. They also put waste air into the sky.The sky is not as blue as it was before. The air is very dirty. Many people have been badly
ill
when they take in the poluted air. Our living conditions are becoming better and better, but
our lives are facing a serious problem. I want to warn people not to pollute
the environment
any more. We must do
everything possible to protect
our earth.
作者原始稿:
I'm sad to see this picture.I have so much to say about the pollution in my hometown.When I was a child ,I lived here happily. Then a clear river went through our village with many fish swimming in it.The trees were green .The air was fresh. The sky was blue and clear.Those days our living condition was not very good, but we had many beautiful places to visit. As the morden factories are being built, the environment has been worse and worse. The factories are pouring waste water into the river . Many fish have died. The water is not clean any longer. They also put waster air into the sky.The sky is not as blue as it was before. The air is very dirty. Many people have been ill badly when they take in the poluted air. Our living condition is becoming better and better, but our lives are facing a serious problem. I want to warn people not to do bad things any more. We must stop doing bad things to our earth.
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