摆脱小儿科英语作文一二三

Writing: how to break away from the kid’s stuff

山东外国语职业技术大学外语学院     岳守国

前言：英语是黑山老妖，害死了多少接近它的人。今日国师挂帅，率众出征，讨伐这个怪兽！英语这玩意也太上头了，心心念念的狼人终于到了，我飞起就是一jio，开动难点收割机，带领爱豆们割韭菜，也算带节奏。这画面太美辣眼睛，但根本没在怕的，只要你跑得够快，失败就追不上你。不朽的青春有个放肆的梦，可以让我哭但别让我输。阿拉丁的神灯啊，照亮我前进的路吧！

友情提示 (Friendly Reminder) ：摆脱小儿科作文可以运用三个具体措施—— 1）中级词汇点缀其间； 2）习语、词组拼多多； 3）多样化的句式结构。 从句子结构、语法结构和措辞上下功夫，就可以写出漂亮的单句。

（注：国师= 岳守国老师≠国家大师）

一、一般与高级 （国师种草，菜鸟打call）

1. 改变句式：The bell is ringing now. (一般)  →  There goes the bell ! 铃响了！ (高级)

2. 改变语态：People suggest that the meeting be put off.  (一般)　 →

It is suggested that the meeting be put off.  有人建议会议延期。 (高级)

3. 使用不定式：He is so kind that he can do me a favor.  (一般)　 →

He is so kind as to do me a favor. 他人很好，愿意帮我一忙。 (高级)

4. 使用过去分词：Lisa walked out of the lab and many guys followed her.  (一般)  → Followed by many guys, Lisa walked out of the lab.  丽萨走出实验室，后面跟着很多人。(高级)

5. 使用现在分词：When she saw my hairdo, she got a surprise.  (一般)  →　Seeing my hairdo, she got a surprise.  看到我的发型的时候，她吃了一惊。 (高级)

6. 使用名词性从句：She happened to have met him.  (一般)   →

It happened that she had met him. 恰好，她曾经见过他。 (高级)

7. 使用定语从句：The girl is spoken highly of. Her homework was well done.  (一般)  →The girl whose homework was well done is spoken highly of. 作业好的女生受到高度评价。 (高级)

8. 使用状语从句： I won’t believe what he says.  (一般)  →  No matter what he says, I won’t believe what he says.  不管他说什么，我也不相信。 (高级)

9. 使用虚拟语气：The patient didn’t die because there were the efforts of the doctor.  (一般)  → But for the efforts of the doctor, the patient would have died.  若没有医生的努力，那位病人本会死去的。 (高级)

10. 使用强调句型：I was born in 1987.  (一般)   → It was in 1987 that I was born.  我的出生就是在1987年。 (高级)

11. 使用倒装：Though I’m sick, I’ll carry on.  (一般)   →  Sick as I am, I’ll carry on.  尽管我病了，我还要继续呀。 (高级)

12. 使用并列句：If you go through the gate, you’ll find me.   (一般)　→Go through the gate, and you’ll find me.  穿过这个门，你就能找到我。 (高级)

13. 加大词汇量：词汇量的大小能从一个角度体现知识贮存量的多寡，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。  As a result, the plan was a failure.   (一般)　 → Consequently, the scheme turned out to be abortive.  因而，这个规划证明流产了。 (高级)

二、句子扩展 （元气满满，细品超燃）

1. Our garden is nice.  → Our garden (which is) located to the south of   

our dorm is nice, so we  frequently take a stroll there.  坐落在我们宿舍南面的花园很漂亮，因此我们经常在那里散步。

2. Spring is coming. → As warm wind blows, spring is coming around to the vast land bit by bit.  暖风吹拂之时，春天又渐渐地回归茫茫大地。

3.    I favor the backpack.  → Still a freshgirl, I favor the backpack given to me by Mom who gave birth to and nurtured me.  依然是大一女生呢，我喜爱生我养我的妈妈送给我的双肩包。

4. He asked for a day’s leave.  → To see me off, he asked for a day’s leave to my town.   为了给我送行，他请了一天假到我的城市。

5. The man is my English teacher.  → To my joy, the sparse-haired man on the platform is my English teacher, a professor.  令我高兴的是，讲台上头发稀疏的人是我的英语老师，一位教授呢。

6. Grandpa keeps a lamb.  → In our yard, my amiable grandpa keeps a lamb, which was presented by a distant relative.  在我们的院子里，和蔼可亲的爷爷养了一只小羊羔，是一个远房亲戚送的。

7. The plate is oily.  → The plate where I eat fried fish is so oily that I’d love to lick it.  我吃炸鱼的盘子油乎乎的，因此我想舔一舔它。

8. The kitchen is tidy.  → The kitchen where my mom does cooking, is tidy as my dad clears it up every other day.  我妈做饭的厨房很整洁，只因我爸爸每隔一天清理一次。

9. The boiler has broken down.  → The boiler on the 2nd floor has broken down, so you’d better have it repaired right away.  二楼的开水炉坏了，你最好立刻找人修理一下。

10.   The insect flew away.  → The insect, which my bosom friend had caught in the botanical garden, flew away due to her carelessness.  由于不小心，我闺蜜在植物捕捉的昆虫飞走了。

11. Yellow leaves are falling.  → Yellow leaves are falling from the branches of the trees, thus we know winter is at hand.  黄叶从树枝上飘落，因此我们知道冬天即将到来。

三、句式模仿 （干货多多，酱紫很火）

 仿写各类从句 

1. 定语从句：I favor the tangerines which you presented to me.  我喜爱你赠送给我的桔子。

2. 宾语从句：I feel (that) we have a power failure.  我觉得停电了。

3. 表语从句：This is what puppy love is like.  这就是初恋的样子。

4. 主语从句：It is natural that a worn-out tyre leaks.  旧轮胎漏气，这是很自然的。

5. 状语从句： Though he was in danger, he remained cool-headed. 尽管身处险境，他依然头脑冷静。

 仿写现在分词短语

1. 定语：There are some girls dancing outside theatre.  一些女孩在阶梯教外面外跳舞。

2. 原因状语：Being refused, he is downhearted.  因为被拒绝了，他很失望。

3. 时间状语：Seeing the train’s arrival, she took up her baggage.  看到火车到达，她拿起了行李。

 仿写过去分词短语

1. The paintings stolen from the museum haven’t been found.  博物馆失窃的画仍未找到。

2. The murderer was brought in, his handstied behind.  凶手被带了进来，双手被绑在后面。

3. He is a man loved by all.  他是一个受大家爱戴的人。

4. Women are limited to the more poorly paid jobs.  女性仅限于做一些薪水较低的工作。

5. There is a vehicle parked outside the house.  房子外边停着一辆车。

6. The management system used in this school is successful.  本学校使用的管理系统很成功。

 仿写动词不定式

1. 主语：It is essential to figure out the controversial issue.   弄清楚争议问题是绝对必要的。

2. 表语：My desire is to explore the Dunhuang Grottoes.  我的愿望是探索敦煌石窟。

3. 宾语：She has decided to be a volunteer at the water games.  她已决定在水运会上做志愿者。

4. 宾补：We expect our supervisors to keep us company.  期望导师们陪同我们。

5. 定语：There are many avenues to solve the knotty problem.  有很多解决这个难题的途径。

6. 状语：He scrutinized his packpack to search for car-sick medicine.  他细看双肩包，找晕车药。

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