G9:storyEleven
(2023-10-28 06:27:52)分类: 暖暖写作空间-writing |
Sandra Cignero's short story "Eleven" uses uses characterization to
illustrate an adolescent's struggle to shape their identity to
conform with social expectations. The author uses the speech of
Rachel and Mrs. Price to demonstrate that society does not want for
one to mature, however, it simply forces arbitrary expectations
onto one. When Mrs. Price notices that Rachel has pushed the red
sweater onto the very tip of the table, she exclaims, "You put that
sweater on right now and no more nonsense." In an attempt at
rebellion against the teacher, she said, "But it's not -" However,
she was interrupted by a harsh "Now!" from Mrs. Price. The fact
that Mrs. Price uses the word "nonsense" to describe Rachel's
refusal to touch the sweater, even if it's not hers, shows that her
teacher is not willing to listen to Rachel's childish explanation.
In this scenario, Mrs. Price does not show understanding to
Rachel's situation, which is indicated in the story by her refusal
to listen to Rachel's explanation. Mrs. Price imposes the
expectation on Rachel that she should stop fussing around and
simply "put that sweater on." The author uses the word "but" coming
from Rachel to signify her attempts to correct the
misunderstanding. But, the teacher's complete ignorance,
exemplified by her refusal to allow Rachel to complete her
sentence, indicates that she simply wants Rachel to conform to her
expectations. The lack of communication between the two shows how
the social expectations involuntarily imposed on Rachel does not
wait for her maturation.