没有及时回复而道歉的电子邮件

本篇写作中可能运用的语言素材有：

I am delighted to do sth.（由于...我很高兴）；

I am sorry for sth.（由于...很抱歉）；

be busy with sth.（忙于...）；

prepare for（为...做准备）；

earn my own living（自食其力）；

face the world（见世面）；

accumulate experience（积累经验）。

[2013年高考英语山东卷英语作文满分作文展示]

Dear Tom,

I'm glad toget your e-mail but sorry for not replying in time. I'm busy with my study recently, because this term is going to end. I have to prepare for the final-term exam.(开篇点题，说明未能及时回复的原因)

In your e-mail, you asked me my plan for the coming summer holiday. First, I'm going to get a part-time job to earn some money. Meanwhile, I can cumulate working experience. Second, I have to go over my lessons, which are the key task of me now. Last, maybe I'll tour to some places of interest, but Idon't know whether I have the chance and economic strength. (关联词使用合理，逐条陈述假期计划，使文章层次分明)

What about you? What will you do in your summer holiday? I hope you can reply me soon.

Thank you!

Yours,

Li Hua

[2013年高考英语山东卷英语作文失分作文分析]

Dear Tom,

What are you doing? (疑问词使用错误，此处是询问对方近况，疑问词应用How) You asked me in your last letter about my plan for the coming summer vacation. I am sorry that I didn't reply without delaying (词性错误，delay本身可以用作名词). How I wish I will read (动词错误，wish后宾语从句用虚拟语气，此处will应为would) and reply your email as soon as I received it. (冗余哕唆) However, I was busy preparing for my final exam at that time, which is vital for me. As a result, I had no choice but to completely focus on my study, for which I am very sorry. I hope you can understand me.

During the holiday, I am going to do a part-time job. On the one hand, I can earn some money to reduce the burden of my families (词形错误，family本身有“家人”之意，此处无需变为复数). On the other hand, I can accumulate the social experience, which does good to my future life. At the same time, I will not forget to go over my lessons. I will spend an unforgettable holiday. How will you spend your holiday? I hope you'll have a good time.

These are my plan (词形错误，应用复数) for the summer vacation. What's yours? I am looking forward to receive (词性错误，to是介词，故receive应用动名词形式) your earliest reply.

Yours,

Li Hua