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1. The unpaid community service should be a necessary part in high college programs (such as helping your neighbor or teaching the children sports or working for the charity).To what extent do you agree or disagree?
选A+1,A+2,A+4
评:A+3包括在A+4中,不及A+4全面。
A+5牵强,无偿社区服务可以让学生们的身体得到更多锻炼,所以应该进行无偿社区服务,这个因果关系不成立。干啥不锻炼身体啊?要是因为锻炼身体去做义工,还不如去操场跑一圈,怎么说也轮不到这个理由。
A+6 看电视上网什么的可以开阔知识面,没听过无偿社区服务可以让学生们开阔知识面的。

2. Nowadays, some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works by using computers. Do you agree or disagree?
选A-1,A-3,A-4

评:A-2:不能因为关掉博物馆或美术馆有几个人要失业就说还是需要将它们留下来,这是一个非常次要的原因。
A-5:跟论点不相关。
A-6:讲的是不去博物馆或美术馆在家里上网浏览文物资料、艺术品的好处,是主张

 

 

当年刚刚来到新东方,多么意气风发,随着年龄的增长,似乎已经不再那么张扬了。

 

The seemingly constructive proposal that young people who have just accomplished their high school career should be encouraged to work or travel for one year has been warmly accepted by several educationists on the ground that this policy will really benefit the growth of these young in a long run. But there are also many who oppose the idea, saying that the measure is unnecessary and its advantages can be generated by complimentary means during college. In what follows, I shall discuss the pros and cons of the policy.

Those who believe in the measure say that students benefit a lot from travelling or working for a year before their formal university education. First, they can more broadly acquainted themselves with the society, deepen their understanding of the outside world, and thus better coordinate their objectives of learning with the needs of the society. In contrast, by immediate entrance to university they can not steer the direction of their study well and may di
审题练习 针对所给的雅思作文题目以及框架,选择适当的分支观点在其后用“√”标出

例 Some people think that universities should provide knowledge and skills related to future career. Others think the true function of the university is to give access to knowledge for its own sake. What is your opinion? (一边倒+让步式,认为大学应该教授学生与未来就业相关的知识和技能,但是也有其他责任。)

一边倒A+ 认为大学应该教授学生与未来就业相关的知识和技能
A+1: 大学的责任就是教给学生知识和技能            
A+2: 大学的职能之一,就是教给学生足以用来谋生的知识和技能 
A+3:毕业生就业率的高低,现在已经成为大学排名和学生择校时考虑的一个重要指标,事关大学生存和发展。 
A+4: 学生选择上大学,绝大多数是存在着这样的假设:起码要大学毕业,才好找工作 
A+5:大学不能固步自封,应该与时俱进,研究实际学问,讲授实际知识和技能,大学培养的,绝不是书呆子,而是能够解决实际问题的实用人才  

连句1

1The heavy rain started suddenly, so we stopped planting our trees.

2Frank wanted to go swimming, but Mary decided to go shopping.

3

第三题
1. The police should not carry guns.
2. The percentage of registered accountants increased by 67.9%.
3. The number of bicyclists stabilized at about 10 million.
4. University teachers should lay more stress on practical courses.
5. The graph illustrates the distribution of world population by continent in 1800, 1900 and 1997, respectively.
6. In the near future, intelligent robots will take the place of machine operators.
7. Zoos are cruel prisons.
8. The high salary makes a job appealing.
9. The incomes of many sports stars are truly astounding.
10. Sport is a symbol of peace and fairness.
11. The zoo offers fatigued city dwellers a place for recreation.
12. Teachers teach students far more than just knowledge.
13. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.
14. The deadline is October 1.
15. Playing computer games is time-consuming.
16. Now there is an increasing interest in experim
学生习作
修改:

The drawing depicts that a boy, after a long distance running, is just hitting the ending rod(reaching the finishing line). There are two marks on the ground. The one after the boy marks “entering”and the one in the front of the boy marks “starting”(此句太生硬,是死译了汉语思想).
From the drawing, we can conclude easily that “Ending means another beginning”. Defferent (Different)races that come around one after another consist (constitute)our lives. We have no choice but to face them. In college, we “run” with our classmates. In company(companies), we “run”with our colleagues. During the race, we must always try out (our)best (加逗号,)for if you are lazy you will loss your position(we are lazy, we will lose our position代词突然转移的错误). To “run”faster and to (删掉to)keep up with the quick development of modern technology and our society is the principle of future society. The early you end the race, the early you ca

基础不雄厚,菜鸟岂能变大师?

如果有人说是我教出了全球雅思作文满分9分的那位学生,那一定是不怀好意的嘲讽。这个高分学员只是纯属偶然地出现在了我的雅思课堂,换另外一位合格的教师去教她的写作,我想结果应该还会差不多。

  写作之提高,上一个辅导班,没有雄厚的基础,就可以菜鸟变大师?这岂不是痴人说梦?

  当年怀一腔青春热血,离开咸阳一家毛纺织厂,奔赴西安外国语学院,扎根杨家村民居,开始含辛茹苦的英语求学

                   献给梵高的Starry, Starry Night

要怀着怎样的心情,来倾听一位伟大音乐人为一位伟大艺术家献上的Starry, Starry Night呢?

Don McLean拨动指尖,木吉他流淌出来的纯净空灵的音符,和着这位民谣歌手对诗般歌词天籁梵音般的吟唱,让我们一边品味音乐,一边欣赏画作,同时,对一位世人眼中的疯子短暂、坎坷却又辉煌、灿烂的37

雅思强化班讲义的语言篇体现了杨氏写作提高路线图的精华,希望大家认真做,体会路线图的精神!练习四是假设同学们学会了写句子而给大家设计的一个篇章练习,松哥是用7分写的,大家仔细体会,因为篇章不就是由句子写成的么?
祝大家考试成功!

 练习一 写好简单句

1. The police should not carry guns.

2. The percentage of registered accountants increased by 67.9%.

3. Working  outside makes it impossible for mothers to take good care of their children.

4. The incomes of many sports stars are truly astounding.

5. Young criminals should be punished to sweep the street.

6. The zoo offers fatigued city dwellers a place for recreation.
7.Playing computer games is time-consuming.
8.There have been an increasing number of juvenile delinquents.
练习二 换词

将下列相同的词替换成同义词、上义词或者代词(答案)

1.    amusement (同义词)

2.    He&n