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【长沙雅思】《雅思官方指南》中对于7分示范的点评

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【长沙雅思】《雅思官方指南》中对于7分示范的点评

Comments on Speaking Samples
 
Speaking Sample 1 
 
 
Fluency & Coherence
流利性与连贯性
 
The candidate speaks at length without noticeable effort or loss of coherence. There is very little hesitation, and she is able to talk continuously with only occasional hesitation and repetition. There is some good use of cohesive devices, for instance:
考生在无明显困难、不失连贯的情况下表达详尽。她极少犹豫,可以不间断地谈话,仅偶尔犹豫和重复。表达中有效地使用了衔接手段,例如:
“… and another reason is that …”
“… both for work and also for entertainment …”
 
However, the range of cohesive features and discourse markers is not wide enough for a higher band. Some referencing and connectives are missing, with some overuse of basic items. For example:
但是,衔接方式和语篇标记的多样性未达到更高分数的要求。缺少部分指代和连接词,有时过度使用基本用语。例如:
“You can visit a lot of place without going out, without leaving the country, you just watch the TV programmes about travelling, about country and I think it widen our horizon.”
 
 
Lexical Resource 
词汇多样性
 
The candidate has a wide enough vocabulary to discuss topics at length. There is frequent use of less common items, idioms and good collocation. For instance:
考生的词汇多样性足以就有关话题进行详尽的表达。她频繁使用非常用用语、习语以及好的词语搭配。例如:
“… one of the largest and most comprehensive museums in the world …”
“… money-driven …”
“… sustainable development for tourism …”
 
There is some imprecision in word choice. This keeps the rating below a higher band score. For instance:
某些词语的选择不够精确,因而无法达到更高的分数。例如:
“… know some experience …”
“… vivid suggestion …”
“… discuss about …”
 
 
 
 
Grammatical Range & Accuracy 
语法多样性及准确性
 
There is some accuracy and control over the complex structures that are used. Conversely, the frequency of complex constructions is too limited for a higher band. There are some grammatical errors that persist but these do not impede communication or meaning, for instance:
复杂句型的使用具有一定的准确性和控制力。但另一方面,使用复杂结构造句的频率过低,无法获得更高分数。一些语法错误不断出现但并不影响交流或意思表达,例如:
“I think it’s very good place …”
“… it’s a fantastic place that you can know what our history evolves …”
 
 
Pronunciation 
发音
 
There is sustained use of intonation, with effective use of both stress and intonation. An example of this is “EVERY day”. 
持续使用语调,有效地使用了重读和语调,例如 “EVERY day”。
 
 
Overall score: 7 
总分:7

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